Question

9．假如你是新華中學(xué)的學(xué)生李華，你的英國朋友Tom非常喜歡中國的傳統(tǒng)文化，想到你校來學(xué)習(xí)一年的漢語，請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下要點(diǎn)用英語給他寫一封電子郵件．
（1）介紹你們學(xué)校：①75年歷史；②60個(gè)教學(xué)班，200多名教職工；③坐落西安市南郊，校園風(fēng)景如畫．
（2）他將面臨的困難或問題：①語言障礙；②思鄉(xiāng)．
（3）你的建議．
注意：（1）詞數(shù)不少于100詞；
（2）可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)；
（3）信的開頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)給出，但不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)．
Dear Tom，
I'm very glad to hear that you are coming to our school to learn Chinese for a year．Here I'll introduce our school first．
Our school has a history of 75 years and consists of 60 classes．（高分句型一）Over 200 teachers are working here．It is located in the southern suburb of the city of Xi'an．I believe you'll enjoy your life in the picturesque campus．?
However，you'll face some difficulties if you study in our school．Firstly，you may have difficulty with your study because we speak Chinese all day long．Secondly，you'll suffer from homesickness because of living far away from your country．?（高分句型二）
I think you'd better read some books in Chinese to overcome the trouble in understanding the language before you come here．（高分句型三）
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 這篇作文也是要點(diǎn)作文，要點(diǎn)有介紹你們學(xué)校，包括它的歷史；多少教學(xué)班，教職工的數(shù)量；地理位置．還要告訴他將面臨的困難或問題：有語言障礙還有思鄉(xiāng)．這些都應(yīng)在文章中有所交代，不能缺少．另外題目還要求給出自己的建議，要求根據(jù)自己的理解給出切實(shí)可行的意見并說明理由，要讓人信服．寫作時(shí)別忘了用一些復(fù)合句給文章增添色彩．如范文中的：you'll face some difficulties if you study in our school．這是條件句．you may have difficulty in your study because we speak Chinese all day long．這是原因狀語從句．
【亮點(diǎn)說明】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，層次分明，而且使用了多種表達(dá)：have a history of有…的歷史；consist of由…組成；is located in位于；However然而；Firstly首先；Secondly其次；because of由于；have difficulty with在…方面有困難；
Our school has a history of 75 years and consists of 60 classes．（高分句型一）
Secondly，you'll suffer from homesickness because of living far away from your country．?（高分句型二）
 I think you'd better read some books in Chinese to overcome the trouble in understanding the language before you come here．（高分句型三）

解答 Dear Tom，?
       I'm very glad to hear that you are coming to our school to learn Chinese for a year．Here I'll introduce our school first．
       Our school has a history of 75 years and consists of 60 classes．（高分句型一）Over 200 teachers are working here．It is located in the southern suburb of the city of Xi'an．I believe you'll enjoy your life in the picturesque campus．?
       However，you'll face some difficulties if you study in our school．Firstly，you may have difficulty with your study because we speak Chinese all day long．Secondly，you'll suffer from homesickness because of living far away from your country．?（高分句型二）
       I think you'd better read some books in Chinese to overcome the trouble in understanding the language before you come here．（高分句型三）
                                                                                                                                                                               Yours sincerely，
                                                                                                                                                                                     Li Hua

點(diǎn)評(píng) 英語寫作是一項(xiàng)主觀性較強(qiáng)的測(cè)試題．它不僅考查學(xué)生的寫作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學(xué)生在寫作過程中綜合運(yùn)用語言的能力．在撰寫時(shí)要注意主謂語一致，時(shí)態(tài)呼應(yīng)，用詞貼切等．要提高英語寫作水平，需要兩方面的訓(xùn)練：一是語言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓(xùn)練，要有扎實(shí)的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識(shí)造出正確無誤的句子；二是寫作知識(shí)和能力 方面的訓(xùn)練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧．