Question

中國人不善于向家人表達“愛”，但你認為告訴家人你愛他們很重要。請以“Ways to express love to my family”為題，寫出如何向家人表達“愛”。

提示：1．如果父母生日，當面向他們說“我愛你們”‘

2．經(jīng)常幫助家人做家務；

3．經(jīng)常擁抱父母；

4．你自己的看法。

注意：1．詞數(shù)100左右；

2．可以適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

Ways to express love to my family

                                                                                  

 

Answer 1

【答案】

There are various ways to express love . I think saying “ I Love you ” on my father’s or mother’s birthday is a good way to let my parents know how I love them .

I am sure if I often help my parents do some simple housework that I can do , especially when they are tired after work , my parents must feel my love to them .

Besides , I will often give my parents a hug because I learn that people can get relaxed through a warm hug and feel connected to each other , which does good to their health .

Getting small but meaning gifts must be an exciting moment for my loved and I think I will do so on some special days .

【解析】

試題分析：考查半開放性作文。本文是關(guān)于如何向家人表達愛；文章只給出部分要點，需要考生做適當?shù)陌l(fā)揮。可以從認真學習，不讓父母操心的角度出發(fā)。在審題的時候要注意時態(tài)同時注意要點要完全，不能有遺漏。寫作時使用合適的連接詞，讓文章更流暢。

考點：考查半開放性作文

點評：本文屬于半開放性作文，給考生的發(fā)揮余地較大，在個人觀點方面可以從認真學習，不讓父母操心的角度出發(fā)。同時使用高級詞匯和高級句型，讓文章有較好的文采。