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13．目前我國中學生的健康狀況越來越差，這使父母、學校和專家感到憂慮．為解決這一問題，有些人提出將體育納入高考．請結(jié)合實際談談你的看法．
注意：①文中不得透露個人姓名和學校名稱；  ②可以適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫；③詞數(shù)100左右．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇關(guān)于我國中學生的健康狀況越來越差話題的作文．根據(jù)題目要求可知用第一人稱和一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)．內(nèi)容包括：一 說明我國中學生的健康狀況越來越差的現(xiàn)狀和將體育納入高考的建議；二表達自己的看法和建議．
高分句型：
1．The fact that high school students are currently experiencing a sharp decline in health has aroused wide concern among parents，schools and experts．句子里that high school students are currently experiencing a sharp decline in health 是主語The fact 的同位語從句；has aroused 是主句的謂語動詞，表示"激起"．
目前我國高中學生的健康狀況越來越差，這個事實使父母、學校和專家感到憂慮．
2．It is far beyond our ability to manage such a nationwide exam in the sports field．句子里It做形式主語，代指動詞不定式 to manage such a nationwide exam in the sports field；far beyond our ability 表示"遠遠超出我們的能力范圍"．
在體育場上完成全國范圍的體育測試是遠遠超出我們的能力范圍的．

解答 The fact that high school students are currently experiencing a sharp decline in health has aroused wide concern among parents，schools and experts．【高分句型一】To have this problem solved，some people propose that PE be included as a subject in the College Entrance Examination．（說明我國中學生的健康狀況越來越差的現(xiàn)狀和將體育納入高考的建議）
I'm against the idea because it is by no means practical．Setting up standards for the exam alone may well be a hard task．It is far beyond our ability to manage such a nationwide exam in the sports field．【高分句型二】However，good health is an essential foundation of learning．Only when one is in good health can he guarantee efficient learning．Therefore，it is schools'responsibility to help develop their students'awareness of the importance of keeping fit．Moreover，schools should provide sufficient sports facilities for their students to have regular exercise．（表達自己的看法和建議）

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