分析 本文屬于半開(kāi)放式作文,主要以論述的方式為主,圍繞所提供材料的主題,進(jìn)行舉例論證,表達(dá)自己的觀(guān)點(diǎn)和看法,舉例并對(duì)引文的觀(guān)點(diǎn)進(jìn)行論證.在寫(xiě)作時(shí)以第三人稱(chēng)為主,時(shí)態(tài)以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)為主.重要短語(yǔ):as well as (和,又,也),be busy in …(忙于…),feel free (感覺(jué)空閑),talk with…(與…交談),hope for …(希望…),give sb a frequent telephone call (時(shí)常給某人打電話(huà)),try our best to(努力做某事),spend more time doing(花更多時(shí)間做某事),accompany sb(陪伴某人),give sb so much selfless love(給某人無(wú)私的愛(ài)),look after sb(照顧某人).
【高分句型一】
1.However,to the parents,①what they really hope for is ②that their children can come to see them just for a little time to give them a frequent telephone call.
①此處是由連接代詞"what"引導(dǎo)的主語(yǔ)從句,連接代詞"what"在從句中作介詞"for"的賓語(yǔ).
②此處是由連接詞"that"引導(dǎo)的表語(yǔ)從句,"that"在從句中無(wú)意義,只起連接詞的作用.
【高分句型二】
1.The older they get,the more our old parents will feel.
此處是"The+形容詞比較級(jí)+主語(yǔ)+謂語(yǔ);the+形容詞比較級(jí)+主語(yǔ)+謂語(yǔ)"句型,意為"越來(lái)…,越…".
【高分句型三】
3.However busy we may be,we should try our best to spend more time talking with them and accompanying them.
此處是由"However+形容詞+主語(yǔ)+謂語(yǔ)"引導(dǎo)的讓步狀語(yǔ)從句,也可理解為"No matter how busy 主語(yǔ)+謂語(yǔ)",主句為"we should try our best to spend more time talking with them and accompanying them.".
解答 "My son is always on the phone,sleeping,out with his friends,or in his room.He never has time to talk to me."The words above show the deep sadness and loneliness of her as well as other old parents.(揭示所給材料主題)
Nowadays,young men look so busy in modern society that they will never feel free to live or talk with their parents,even on some festival days.However,to the parents,what they really hope for is that their children can come to see them just for a little time to give them a frequent telephone call.【高分句型一】(就材料舉例論證)
The older they get,the more our old parents will feel.【高分句型二】However busy we may be,we should try our best to spend more time talking with them and accompanying them.【高分句型三】It isn't just because they once gave us so much selfless love,but it's our duty to look after them well.(發(fā)表自己的觀(guān)點(diǎn))
點(diǎn)評(píng) 開(kāi)放性作文給出一定的寫(xiě)作主題,并此為基礎(chǔ)進(jìn)行思維和聯(lián)想,自由發(fā)揮.不僅考查學(xué)生在內(nèi)容、結(jié)構(gòu)安排、語(yǔ)言運(yùn)用和組織方面的能力,而且對(duì)學(xué)生的想像力、發(fā)散思維、歸納判斷能力也有很高的要求.寫(xiě)好這類(lèi)作文要注意幾個(gè)步驟:1. 認(rèn)真審題,找準(zhǔn)提示語(yǔ)中的關(guān)鍵詞或句,確定中心思想.2. 依據(jù)關(guān)鍵句,草擬提綱,梳理文章的脈絡(luò)3. 準(zhǔn)確定位人稱(chēng)、時(shí)態(tài).注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和高級(jí)句型使文章顯得更有檔次.4.最后還要認(rèn)真查驗(yàn)是否有漏寫(xiě)情況,有無(wú)拼寫(xiě)錯(cuò)誤及標(biāo)點(diǎn)誤用等.
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