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2．假如你是王華，是星光中學(xué)的學(xué)生會(huì)主席．最近你校李平同學(xué)的母親被查出肺癌，治療需要大筆費(fèi)用．但他家較貧困，也面臨輟學(xué)．現(xiàn)請(qǐng)你寫一封倡議書，號(hào)召全體同學(xué)伸出援助之手，幫助李平同學(xué)的家庭渡過(guò)難關(guān)．
注意：1．詞數(shù)：100左右； 
 2．倡議書的開頭為你擬好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)．
Dear fellow students．
As we all know，Li Ping is very excellent student in our school．He studies very hard and has been highly thought of by his teachers．Unfortunately，recently his mother has been diagnosed with lung cancer．As far as I'm concerned，it will cost too much to recover herself from such a serious disease．What's worse，his family isn't a rich one．If too much money has been spent on cure，there's no doubt that Li Ping will be forced to drop out of school．
As chairman of the Students'Union of Xingguang Middle School，I'll spare no efforts to give Li Ping a hand and donate some money to him．Here I also call on all of us to do the same to him．I just hope that our limited effort will make a difference to his family in need．
Yours，
Wang Hua．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇倡議書作文，動(dòng)筆前，一定要認(rèn)真分析要點(diǎn)，關(guān)鍵是要向大家發(fā)出倡議，幫助這位同學(xué)．寫作時(shí)運(yùn)用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，人稱使用第三人稱和第一人稱，內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)包括：李平同學(xué)的母親被查出肺癌，治療需要大筆費(fèi)用．但他家較貧困，也面臨輟學(xué)；最后作為學(xué)生會(huì)主席，發(fā)出倡議，號(hào)召全體同學(xué)伸出援助之手，幫助李平同學(xué)的家庭渡過(guò)難關(guān)．本文分為兩個(gè)段落即可，第一段介紹李萍的情況，第二段發(fā)出倡議．
重要的短語(yǔ)和句型：
be highly thought of受到高度評(píng)價(jià)              spare no efforts to do 不遺余力的做某事 
be diagnosed with被診斷為                     give sb a hand 幫某人一個(gè)忙
As far as I'm concerned據(jù)我所知              call on sb to do sth號(hào)召某人做某事
recover herself from康復(fù)                     make a difference產(chǎn)生影響 
What's worse更糟糕的是
As we all know，Li Ping is a very excellent student in our school．
本句為as引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語(yǔ)從句，同義表達(dá)還可以用As is known to us all．
If too much money has been spent on cure，there's no doubt that Li Ping will be forced to drop out of school．
本句為一主從復(fù)合句，if引導(dǎo)的一個(gè)條件狀語(yǔ)從句，there is no doubt that為一常用句型，毫無(wú)疑問，…．that引導(dǎo)的為一同位語(yǔ)從句，是對(duì)doubt的解釋說(shuō)明．

解答 Dear fellow students，
      As we all know，Li Ping is a very excellent student in our school．（高分句型）He studies very hard and has been highly thought of by his teachers．Unfortunately，recently his mother has been diagnosed with lung cancer．As far as I'm concerned，it will cost too much to recover herself from such a serious disease．What's worse，his family isn't a rich one．If too much money has been spent on cure，there's no doubt that Li Ping will be forced to drop out of school．（高分句型）（介紹李萍的基本學(xué)習(xí)及家庭情況）
      As chairman of the Students'Union of Xingguang Middle School，I'll spare no efforts to give Li Ping a hand and donate some money to him．（高分句型）Here I also call on all of us to do the same to him．I just hope that our limited effort will make a difference to his family in need．（發(fā)出倡議）
                                                             Yours，
                                                                                                                                             Wang Hua

點(diǎn)評(píng) 這是一篇提綱類作文，我們需要用正確的英語(yǔ)把給出的要點(diǎn)表達(dá)出來(lái)．動(dòng)筆前，一定要認(rèn)真分析要點(diǎn)，理解要點(diǎn)要表達(dá)的含義，不能遺漏要點(diǎn)，跑題偏題．本作文中給出的要點(diǎn)比較具體，故需要準(zhǔn)確表達(dá)．寫作時(shí)注意準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時(shí)也要注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和高級(jí)句型使文章顯得更有檔次．特別注意在選擇句式時(shí)要賦予變化．平時(shí)除了加強(qiáng)詞匯積累，寫作聯(lián)系以外，還可以適當(dāng)記憶一些類似的范文，這樣在考試中可以起到事半功倍的效果．