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13．假設(shè)你是星光中學(xué)的張紅，將參加主題為"Let's Ride Bicycles"的英語(yǔ)演講比賽．請(qǐng)撰寫(xiě)一份演講稿，主要內(nèi)容包括：
1．目前汽車(chē)帶來(lái)的空氣污染和交通堵塞等問(wèn)題．
2．騎自行車(chē)的益處，如能環(huán)保，有利健康等．
3．我的個(gè)人觀點(diǎn)…
參考詞匯：低碳生活：low-carbon life  環(huán)境：environment
保護(hù)：protect  健康：health  污染 pollution
注意：1．詞數(shù)：80--100 詞左右；
4．演講稿開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已給出，請(qǐng)將其抄寫(xiě)在答題卡上且該部分不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)．
Good morning，everyone，
I am Zhang Hong from Xingguang Middle School．The topic of my speech is"Let's Ride Bicycles
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Answer 1

分析 本文是應(yīng)用文中常見(jiàn)的演講稿．話題是號(hào)召同學(xué)多騎自行車(chē)．有很強(qiáng)的可寫(xiě)性，文章的要點(diǎn)也基本上都給出來(lái)了，但只是一個(gè)提綱，考生還需要做適當(dāng)?shù)陌l(fā)揮．在寫(xiě)作的過(guò)程中，要注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和高級(jí)句型，如強(qiáng)調(diào)句，倒裝句等，讓文章更上檔次．同時(shí)在列舉措施的時(shí)候要使用合適的連接詞如：First，second，Besides，What's more等，讓文章看起來(lái)很有條理，也很流暢．本篇文章在寫(xiě)作時(shí)不要啰嗦，力求簡(jiǎn)潔的表達(dá)自己的觀點(diǎn)．
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】所給范文開(kāi)頭緊扣題目，起到了開(kāi)篇點(diǎn)題的作用．As is known to all，with the improvement of people's living standards，cars have become a popular means of transport，bringing great convenience to our life．這句話用了定語(yǔ)從句和現(xiàn)在分詞做狀語(yǔ)，As far as I'm concerned，riding bicycles is a good solution．bicycles don't need any petrol and they are energy-saving．bicycles are environmentally friendly because they won't give off waste gas．這句話用了動(dòng)名詞做主語(yǔ)．另外文章中上下文的銜接句成了本范文的一個(gè)亮點(diǎn)，F(xiàn)or one thing，F(xiàn)or another，What's more，等的使用使文章渾然一體．

解答 Good morning，everyone，
I am Li Hua form Xingguang Middle School．The topic of my speech is"Let's Ride Bicycles"．
As is known to all，with the improvement of people's living standards，cars have become a popular means of transport，bringing great convenience to our life．（高分句型）However，they have also caused some problems such as air pollution and traffic jams．
How can we solve the problems then？As far as I'm concerned，riding bicycles is a good solution．（高分句型）For one thing，bicycles don't need any petrol and they are energy-saving．For another，bicycles are environmentally friendly because they won't give off waste gas．（高分句型）What's more，riding bicycles is a good way for us to exercise and it is beneficial to our health．（高分句型）
Therefore，let's take the responsibility to build up a low carbon city by riding bicycles．Come on and join us!
Thank you!

點(diǎn)評(píng) 英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)作是一項(xiàng)主觀性較強(qiáng)的測(cè)試題．它不僅考查學(xué)生的寫(xiě)作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學(xué)生在寫(xiě)作過(guò)程中綜合運(yùn)用語(yǔ)言的能力．在撰寫(xiě)時(shí)要注意主謂語(yǔ)一致，時(shí)態(tài)呼應(yīng)，用詞貼切等．要提高英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)作水平，需要兩方面的訓(xùn)練：一是語(yǔ)言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓(xùn)練，要有扎實(shí)的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識(shí)造出正確無(wú)誤的句子；二是寫(xiě)作知識(shí)和能力 方面的訓(xùn)練以掌握寫(xiě)作方面的基本方法和技巧．