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【題目】你校校報(bào)的英語(yǔ)專(zhuān)欄正在開(kāi)展以“健康的生活方式”為主題的英語(yǔ)征文活動(dòng)，你打算參加。請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下提示信息寫(xiě)一篇英語(yǔ)短文。

1. 營(yíng)養(yǎng)均衡的膳食； 2. 經(jīng)常參加體育鍛煉； 3. 樂(lè)觀(guān)的人生態(tài)度。

注意：1.字?jǐn)?shù)100左右（開(kāi)頭已給出，但不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）；

2.可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

All of us want to live a healthy life. The following are some useful tips.

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Answer 1

【答案】All of us want to live a healthy life. The following are some useful tips.

First, it’s important that we have a balanced diet because we need adequate nutrition to grow tall and strong. Not only should we take in enough grains and meat, but we should also eat fruit and vegetables. Second, taking exercise regularly is of equal importance, which can help us to keep fit and release stress. More importantly, we should develop a positive attitude, which allows us to look at things positively no matter what happens. Even if we are in a difficult situation, we should never lose hop.

Proper food, regular exercise and a positive attitude will help us live a healthy life.

【解析】試題分析：本文是以“健康的生活方式”為主題的英語(yǔ)征文活動(dòng)，內(nèi)容包括1. 營(yíng)養(yǎng)均衡的膳食； 2. 經(jīng)常參加體育鍛煉； 3. 樂(lè)觀(guān)的人生態(tài)度。根據(jù)所給提綱并以此為基礎(chǔ)充分發(fā)揮自己的想象力，靈活運(yùn)用英語(yǔ)知識(shí)，采用不同的表達(dá)方式將各要點(diǎn)完整地表述出來(lái)。寫(xiě)作時(shí)注意時(shí)態(tài)、語(yǔ)態(tài)的合理運(yùn)用，主次分明，詳略得當(dāng)，語(yǔ)言力求準(zhǔn)確、簡(jiǎn)潔。根據(jù)情景的發(fā)展，按順序安排好材料。同時(shí)應(yīng)選用合適的連接詞或過(guò)渡詞，適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】

本文是一篇提綱式作文，采用三段式，內(nèi)容齊全，符合要求，文章結(jié)構(gòu)布局合理，使用高級(jí)句子。it’s important that we have a balanced diet because we need adequate nutrition to grow tall and strong.主語(yǔ)從句和原因狀語(yǔ)從句完美結(jié)合；Not only should we take in enough grains and meat, but we should also eat fruit and vegetables.部分倒裝堪稱(chēng)經(jīng)典；taking exercise regularly is of equal importance, which can help us to keep fit and release stress.動(dòng)名詞做主語(yǔ)，which引導(dǎo)非限制性定語(yǔ)從句更是錦上添花；Even if we are in a difficult situation, we should never lose hop. Even if引導(dǎo)讓步狀語(yǔ)從句；另外，F(xiàn)irst, is of equal importance, More importantly,等的運(yùn)用為文章增色添彩。