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1．A researcher at the Institute of Atmospheric Physics of the Chinese Academy of Sciences says that cooking emissions（排放物） is a main pollutant in the atmospheric pollution．According to the researcher，cooking emission occupies 15% to 20% in the whole PM2.5pollution sources in the urban area in Beijing during the summer time．
Authorities in Kunming，Yunnan province，have banned restaurants from using firewood to cook a popular chicken dish in order to reduce the air pollution．The Environmental Protection Bureau of Kunming has stopped approving new restaurants that serve Chaihuoji，or firewood chicken，and asked the existing ones to replace firewood with clean fuel．Dozens of firewood chicken restaurants that opened in the past six months will need to switch to the environment-friendly fuel．
The city follows the example of Chongqing in its attempt to control smog by asking restaurants to change the way they cook some of the traditional dishes，though it remains to be seen whether the move can reduce the air pollution level．Earlier this year，Chongqing said no to smoked bacon，open-air barbecue and chicken cooked by burning firewood．
[寫作內(nèi)容]
1以約30個(gè)詞概括上文的主要內(nèi)容．
2以約120個(gè)詞就"空氣污染"這個(gè)話題談?wù)勀愕目捶�，�?nèi)容包括：
（1）你對(duì)昆明"禁止燃燒柴火"舉措的評(píng)價(jià)；
（2）簡(jiǎn)述你所在地存在的空氣污染現(xiàn)象；
（3）作為中學(xué)生，談?wù)勀闳绾螢榉乐慰諝馕廴咀髫暙I(xiàn)．
[寫作要求]
1作文中可以使用親身經(jīng)歷或虛構(gòu)的故事，也可以參照閱讀材料的內(nèi)容，但不得直接引用原文中的句子．
2作文中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校名稱．
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Answer 1

分析 本文為讀寫任務(wù)作文．
文段主要講的是在大城市里，焚燒柴火來煮食造成的油煙導(dǎo)致的空氣污染問題．
寫作要點(diǎn)為：1．以約30個(gè)詞概括短文的主要內(nèi)容．
2．以約120個(gè)詞就"空氣污染"這個(gè)話題談?wù)勀愕目捶�，�?nèi)容包括：
（1）你對(duì)昆明"禁止燃燒柴火"舉措的評(píng)價(jià)；
（2）簡(jiǎn)述你所在地存在的空氣污染現(xiàn)象；
（3）作為中學(xué)生，談?wù)勀闳绾螢榉乐慰諝馕廴咀髫暙I(xiàn)．

解答 According to a research，cooking emissions pollute theair．To reduce the air pollution，the city of Kunming，following the example of Chongqing，required restaurants to use clean fuel to replace firewood．
I am totally in favour of the measures taken by the Kunming government．Althoughwe may lose a traditional way of cooking，we'll get cleaner air．Anyway，a bluesky is far more important than a delicious dish/cuisine．
Just like many places in China，there also exist the phenomenaof air pollution in the place where I live．In the neighborhood，rubbish isburned directly before being classified and processed，which pollutes the airseverely．On the roads，cars and trucks fill the roads，givingoff waste gas．In the chemical plants not far away，harmful gases are emittedwithout being dealt with．
As middle school students，we should do our share infighting against the air pollution．Firstly，we are supposed to go to school bybike or public transportation rather than by car．Besides，we can plant treesin and around the city as they absorb carbon dioxide from the air．Last but notleast，we should arouse people's awareness of environmental protection and callon them to make a contribution to stopping the air pollution．

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