Question

【題目】近年來我國多地霧疆天氣不斷增多，極大地影響了人們的健康和生活。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)提示，用英語寫一篇文章，向某英語報(bào)社投稿。
提示：
1).對(duì)現(xiàn)狀的描述；
2).對(duì)生活造成的影響；
3).分析霧霾形成的原因；
4).建議減少霧霾的措施。（至少兩點(diǎn)）
注意：
1).上下文連貫，行文流暢。
2).詞數(shù)150個(gè)左右（開頭及結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）。
霧霆的：hazy
Dear Editor,
Recently many places in China were blanketed with thick fog.
Best regards!
Yours,
Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Editor,

Recently many people in China were blanketed with thick fog.The Air Quality Index in most parts reached 500. Everything around disappeared from our sight.Some highways were closed.More traffic jams and accidents happened.People had to wear masks.What's more,many people found it difficult to breathe.

The heavy hazy weather in China has been caused by many factors.First,the severely polluted environment contributed a Jot to this nightmare.Second,the increase of cars in the city area plays an important role.The cars send off a lot of poisonous gas.

In my opinion,we should call on people to use mote public transport,thus reducing the number of cars in the streets.Besides,some factories which cause pollution should be closed down.What's more,we have to do more to raise people's awareness of environmental protection.Only in this way can we expect to have more sunny days.

Best regards!

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】本文是一篇英文信件，要求考生就霧霾天氣給人們的健康和生活帶來的影響，給英語報(bào)社投稿。寫作要點(diǎn)已經(jīng)給出，屬于提綱類作文，內(nèi)容包括：1).對(duì)現(xiàn)狀的描述；2).對(duì)生活造成的影響；3).分析霧霾形成的原因；4).建議減少霧霾的措施。（至少兩點(diǎn)），具有半開放性。寫作時(shí)考生要把要點(diǎn)解釋清楚，不能有遺漏。除此之外，還要給出自己的建議，這就要求考生自己拓展發(fā)揮，注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和高級(jí)句型，讓文章更上檔次。在列舉措施的時(shí)候要使用合適的連接詞讓文章看起來流暢，有條理。