Question

短文改錯(cuò)。假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請(qǐng)你修改你同桌寫的一篇作文。
文中共有10處語言錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處。錯(cuò)誤涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改。
增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)（^），并在其下面寫出該加的詞。
刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（\）劃掉。
注意：1. 每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞；
           2. 只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計(jì)分。

     It was 7:15 in the morning of February 8, 2007. I was walking along Park Road towards the east
while an old man came out of the park on the other sides of the street. Then I saw a yellow car drive
up Third Street and made a right turn into Park Road. The next moment the car hit the man while she
was crossing the road. He fall with a cry. The car didn't stop and drive off at full speed going west.
I noticed the driver was young woman wore a pair of glasses and the plate number was AC864. After
two minutes later, I stopped a passing car and took the old man to the nearest hospital.
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Answer 1

     It was 7:15 in the morning of February 8, 2007. I was walking along Park Road towards the 
                   1.on
east while an old man came out of the park on the other sides of the street. Then I saw a 
    2. when                                                                3. side
yellow car drive up Third Street and made a right turn into Park Road. The next moment 
                                                  4. make
the car hit the man while she was crossing the road. He fell with a cry. The car didn't stop 
                                   5. he                                    6. fall
and drive off at full speed going west. I noticed the driver was∧young woman ∧wore a pair 
   7. drove                                                                         8. a          9. who / 改為 wearing
of glasses and the plate number was AC864. After two minutes later, I stopped a passing car 
                                                                                    10. 去掉later
and took the old man to the nearest hospital.