Question

13．請(qǐng)閱讀下列短文，并按照要求用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇150詞左右的文章．
請(qǐng)觀察所給的圖畫(huà)并根據(jù)你對(duì)該圖畫(huà)的理解寫(xiě)一篇英語(yǔ)短文，內(nèi)容包括：
（1）簡(jiǎn)要描述圖片，并說(shuō)明該圖片所揭露的現(xiàn)象；
（2）分析造成該現(xiàn)象的原因（至少兩點(diǎn)）；
（3）提出自己的看法．
要求：1．詞數(shù)150左右．開(kāi)頭已經(jīng)給出，不計(jì)入詞數(shù)．
2．文章中不得提及考生所在學(xué)校及本人姓名．
The Internet has long been regarded as a wonderful tool that allows students to gain insight to useful resources and information．However，this is not always the case．______________________________

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇漫畫(huà)作文，讓我們根據(jù)對(duì)圖畫(huà)的理解寫(xiě)一篇英語(yǔ)短文，這需要我們發(fā)揮英語(yǔ)思維，將提供的信息用英語(yǔ)完整流暢的表達(dá)出來(lái)．寫(xiě)作需要用第三人稱(chēng)，時(shí)態(tài)主要是一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)包括：簡(jiǎn)要描述圖片，并說(shuō)明該圖片所揭露的現(xiàn)象；分析造成該現(xiàn)象的原因（至少兩點(diǎn)）；提出自己的看法．我們此篇作文分為三部分，第一部分為簡(jiǎn)要描述圖片，并說(shuō)明該圖片所揭露的現(xiàn)象．第二部分為分析造成該現(xiàn)象的原因．第三部分為提出自己的看法
重點(diǎn)短語(yǔ)與句型：
be  happy with 對(duì)…滿意
depend on  依靠，依賴(lài)
make  use of利用
account for 解釋?zhuān)�說(shuō)明…的原因
 take measures to do sth 采取措施做某事
高分句型一：There are many reasons accounting for this phenonmenon．此句用了現(xiàn)在分詞短語(yǔ)作后置定語(yǔ)
高分句型二：Firstly，it is vital that students gain confidence in themselves and their abilities while doing tasks．此句it is vital that 從句用虛擬語(yǔ)氣，that 可省略．
高分句型三：Besides，what teachers and parents should do is encourage students to be creative．此句是what引導(dǎo)的主語(yǔ)從句．

解答 The Internet has long been regarded as a wonderful tool that allows students to gain insight to useful resources and information．However，this is not always the case．As is vividly shown in the picture，a boy is happy with the fact that he can depend on the Internet to finish tasks without any difficulty．It mirrors a common phenomenon．Nowadays，students tend to make use of the Internet to gain information they need．（簡(jiǎn)要描述圖片，并說(shuō)明該圖片所揭露的現(xiàn)象）
　　　There are many reasons accounting for this phenonmenon．（高分句型一） To begin with，students find it convenient to surf the Internet for useful information，where problems can be solved with the help of several clicks．What's more，there's no doubt that the pressure to succeed also causes students to turn to computers for accurate answers．As a result，it's likely that students will lose interest in studying，which is not beneficial to their overall development．（分析造成該現(xiàn)象的原因）
　　　In my opinion，measures must be taken to solve the problem．Firstly，it is vital that students gain confidence in themselves and their abilities while doing tasks．（高分句型二） Besides，what teachers and parents should do is encourage students to be creative．（ 高分句型三）Finally，doing tasks independently is of great significance．（提出自己的看法）

點(diǎn)評(píng) 英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)作是一項(xiàng)主觀性較強(qiáng)的測(cè)試題．它不僅考查學(xué)生的寫(xiě)作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學(xué)生在寫(xiě)作過(guò)程中綜合運(yùn)用語(yǔ)言的能力．在撰寫(xiě)時(shí)要注意主謂語(yǔ)一致，時(shí)態(tài)呼應(yīng)，用詞貼切等．要提高英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)作水平，需要兩方面的訓(xùn)練：一是語(yǔ)言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓(xùn)練，要有扎實(shí) 的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識(shí)造出正確無(wú)誤的句子；二是寫(xiě)作知識(shí)和能力 方面的訓(xùn)練以掌握寫(xiě)作方面的基本方法和技巧．