Question

假如你是李華，是某中學(xué)高三學(xué)生。擬合其他一些學(xué)生將前往澳大利亞進(jìn)行交流活動(dòng)，你被安排在Jones家寄宿。請(qǐng)你用英語(yǔ)向Jones寫(xiě)一封信，介紹自己的一些情況，要點(diǎn)如下：

1）自我介紹、家庭情況；2）告訴他們你的生活習(xí)慣；

3）你的心愿

注意：

1）可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，使行文連貫；

2）詞數(shù)120--150左右，開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)給出，不計(jì)入總次數(shù)。

Dear Mr Jones,

                                                                    

                                                                    

                                                                    

                                                                     

Best wishes!

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

 

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Mr. Jones,

My name is Jiang Ming, a senior 3 student from Shandong Province. There are four people in my family---my father, a postman, my mother, a nurse, my twin brother and me. We love each other and live a happy life.

I like pets, such as dogs, cats and so on, so it's OK for me if your family keeps some pets. I don't smoke but I don't mind if anybody smokes. Besides, I enjoy various foods, including pork, beef and mutton and I'm not particular about fooD.What's more, I'm in good health and don't take any medicine. I’m also a sports fan and take exercise outdoors.

I believe that I will have a good time during my stay in your home because I have been told that your family are friendly and kinD.I also believe that I can learn a lot about your culture and improve my English.

Best wishes

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

【解析】

試題分析：考查應(yīng)用文中的書(shū)信的寫(xiě)作。你被安排在Jones家寄宿。請(qǐng)你用英語(yǔ)向Jones寫(xiě)一封信，介紹自己的一些情況，要點(diǎn)都已經(jīng)給出，書(shū)信類短文的關(guān)鍵在于要點(diǎn)要全面包括，不能有遺漏和省略。但是要點(diǎn)只是提綱，考生還要在此基礎(chǔ)上增加細(xì)節(jié)，同時(shí)注意謀篇布局的順序，運(yùn)用合適的連接詞連接全文，同時(shí)選擇高級(jí)的詞匯和語(yǔ)法項(xiàng)目讓文章更有文采。審題時(shí)注意本文使用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，描述要盡量選擇簡(jiǎn)潔的語(yǔ)言，運(yùn)用合適的語(yǔ)法規(guī)則和詞匯把各要點(diǎn)都準(zhǔn)確表述出。難點(diǎn)在于選擇詞匯和句型，可以靈活運(yùn)用高級(jí)詞匯和固定短語(yǔ)準(zhǔn)確表述。還要用適當(dāng)?shù)倪B接詞被句子連接起來(lái)，這樣文章顯得更連貫。

【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】I don't smoke but I don't mind if anybody smokes. 這句話用了賓語(yǔ)從句，I enjoy various foods, including pork, beef and mutton and I'm not particular about food.這句話有be particular about這個(gè)詞組， I'm in good health and don't take any medicine. 這句話用了be in good health健康良好， I believe that I will have a good time during my stay in your home because I have been told that your family are friendly and kind.這句話有賓語(yǔ)從句，原因狀語(yǔ)從句，文章還使用了一些關(guān)聯(lián)詞， Besides, What's more, 使文章更加連貫。

考點(diǎn)：考查書(shū)信類短文