Question

7．假設(shè)你是李華．你的英國筆友John寫信告訴你近日他由于沉迷于電腦游戲，健康受到很大影響．他十分焦慮．請你根據(jù)以下要點提示，給他寫一封回信，建議他養(yǎng)成良好的生活習(xí)慣．要點如下：
1．限制玩游戲的時間，把精力逐漸轉(zhuǎn)移到其他事情上；
2．規(guī)定起床和睡覺的時間，形成良好的作息習(xí)慣；
3．每天鍛煉半小時，增強(qiáng)體質(zhì)．
注意：1．詞數(shù)120左右；2．開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)．
Dear John，
I'm sorry to hear that you're addicted to computer games which have had a bad influence on your health．
             ．
Yours sincerely，

Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 根據(jù)要點寫一封回信，首先要明確要點所涉及的信息及關(guān)系，其次注意恰當(dāng)?shù)氖褂藐P(guān)聯(lián)詞，例如，firstly，secondly，thirdly或是比較復(fù)雜的，像是to begin with，then，finally．再次，句式的選擇．借助從句的應(yīng)用，讓閱卷人感覺應(yīng)試者有較為深厚的語法功底和極好的語言表現(xiàn)力．
【亮點說明】
如要點中"限制玩游戲的時間"可以處理成you should limit the time that you spend playing computer games，"規(guī)定起床和睡覺的時間，形成良好的作息習(xí)慣；"可以處理成 you should get up and go to bed at a specific time so that you can form a habit of getting up and going to bed regularly．以上均是借助從句的應(yīng)用，顯示出作者扎實的寫作功底．

解答 Dear John，
    I'm sorry to hear that you've addicted to computer games which have had a bad influence on your health．I know you worry about it very much．As a good friend，I'm willing to give you some advice．（寫信開頭）
    Firstly，you should limit the time that you spend playing computer games and pay more attention to other things．（高分句型一）Secondly，you should get up and go to bed at a specific time so that you can form a habit of getting up and going to bed regularly．（高分句型二）Thirdly，you should do exercise for about half an hour every day to strengthen your body．I do hope you can get rid of computer games and form a healthy lifestyle．（提出建議）
                                                                                                                                  Best wishes!
                                                                                                                             Yours sincerely，
                                                                                                                                         Li Hua

點評 英語寫作是一項主觀性較強(qiáng)的測試題．它不僅考查學(xué)生的寫作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學(xué)生在寫作過程中綜合運(yùn)用語言的能力．在撰寫時要注意主謂語一致，時態(tài)呼應(yīng)，用詞貼切等．要提高英語寫作水平，需要兩方面的訓(xùn)練：一是語言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓(xùn)練，要有扎實的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識造出正確無誤的句子；二是寫作知識和能力 方面的訓(xùn)練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧．