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5．假定你是李津，暑假你參加了英國游學(xué)活動(dòng)，住在Mary家中，回國后給Mary寫一封信表示感謝，要點(diǎn)如下：
1．安全抵家：
2．回顧英國游學(xué)體會(huì)：
3．感謝房東的幫助：
4．附寄兩張合影；
5．表達(dá)愿望．
注意：1．詞數(shù)不少于100詞．
2．可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫．
3．結(jié)束語己為你寫好．
Dear Mary，
I've come back home safely．Looking back to my stay in Britain，I felt so happy and satisfied．The beautiful scenery and friendly people impressed me a lot．I also benefited a lot from learning together with local students．More importantly，your help and kindness made it easier for me to have a better understanding of British culture and adapt to the life there．So I'm so grateful to you．
By the way，attached to the letter are two photos taken with you，which I believe will remind you of the happy time we spent together．
You are expected to come to China soon．
     Looking forward to your reply．
Yours，
Li Jin

Answer 1

分析 （高分句型一）Looking back to my stay in Britain，I felt so happy and satisfied．
該句型使用looking現(xiàn)在分詞做狀語，回顧我在英國的日子．
（高分句型二） attached to the letter are two photos taken with you，which I believe will remind you of the happy time we spent together．
該句型使用attached to倒裝句；which引導(dǎo)一個(gè)非限制性定語從句；
高級詞匯：look back on回顧；impress給人印象；adapt to 適應(yīng)；
 More importantly更重要的是；By the way順便說；

解答 Dear Mary，
   I've come back home safely．（高分句型一）Looking back to my stay in Britain，I felt so happy and satisfied．（回顧英語生活）The beautiful scenery and friendly people impressed me a lot．I also benefited a lot from learning together with local students．More importantly，（感謝房東幫助）your help and kindness made it easier for me to have a better understanding of British culture and adapt to the life there．So I'm so grateful to you．
   By the way，（高分句型二） attached to the letter are two photos taken with you，which I believe will remind you of the happy time we spent together．
   You are expected to come to China soon．（表達(dá)愿望）
   Looking forward to your reply．
Yours，
Li Hua

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