Question

假如你是李明，你發(fā)現(xiàn)部分同學(xué)每次遇到重要考試，都會(huì)出現(xiàn)一些焦慮癥狀。請(qǐng)你用英語寫一封信，向某學(xué)生英文報(bào)編輯反映該問題。信的內(nèi)容應(yīng)包括下列要點(diǎn)： 

 焦慮癥狀：     頭暈、乏力、睡眠不好、食欲不振等

 建 議：             1．考前制定好合適的復(fù)習(xí)計(jì)劃

                            2．考試期間正常作息 

                            3．睡前洗熱水澡、喝熱牛奶等有助于睡眠

 其他建議：     (內(nèi)容由考生自己擬定2點(diǎn)) 

 注意：

1.根據(jù)以上內(nèi)容寫一篇短文，不要逐句翻譯，可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)以使行文連貫。

2.要準(zhǔn)確使用語法和詞匯；使用一定的句型、詞匯，清楚、連貫地表達(dá)自己的意思；

3. 詞數(shù)：100個(gè)左右。開頭已給出，不計(jì)詞數(shù)。

參考詞匯：頭暈—dizzy(adj.)  

Dear editor,  

         I’m Li Ming of Senior Three, Guangming Middle School. I’m writing to tell you about some 

symptoms of anxiety among us students before exams. __________________________________ 

 _______________________________________________________________________________ 

 _____________________________________________________________________________ 

Li Ming    

 

Answer 1

【答案】

 

I am Li Ming of Senior Three, Guangming Middle School. I am writing to tell you about some symptoms of anxiety among us students before exams.

Most of us feel nervous whenever we’re taking an important exam. Some will feel dizzy or tired, some will suffer from lack of sleep, and some will lose their appetite. In fact, all these symptoms have terrible effects on our exams and we are all eager to get rid of them.

First of all, in my opinion, it’s important for us to have a fight attitude towards exams. They are only a means of checking how we are getting along with our studies, so there is no need to worry too much about the results. Study hard every day and make careful plans for every exam. In this way we can avoid suffering from the pressure of exams. 

Besides, enough sleep can make us energetic and enable us to perform well in an exam. Therefore, during the period of exams, we should not stay up too late. We can also try a warm bath or a cup of warm milk before going to bed. They might help us to have a sound sleep.

(We’d better go out for a walk or do some outdoor exercises before and during an exam so that we can keep ourselves relaxed and then concentrate ourselves on exams.)

【解析】

試題分析：本文的屬于提綱類寫作，是關(guān)于考試焦慮癥的相關(guān)內(nèi)容，話題切合考生實(shí)際，與考生的生活非常貼近，考生有話可說，有很強(qiáng)的可寫性。要點(diǎn)是以提綱的形式給出的，要求考生有較強(qiáng)的整合能力，在寫作時(shí)充分利用連接詞，高級(jí)句型和詞匯，如果可能在文章結(jié)尾運(yùn)用諺語，以使文章的層次更高。首先應(yīng)該用合適的連接詞把考試焦慮癥的癥狀寫清楚，在發(fā)表個(gè)人建議的時(shí)候，可以適當(dāng)使用高級(jí)的句式和高級(jí)的詞匯來給文章增色。在自己的個(gè)人建議中可以加入諺語，讓文章更上一層樓。

【亮點(diǎn)說明】范文使用了很多詞組：suffer from 遭受，lack of缺乏，be eager to 渴望，get rid of消除，getting along with相處， in my opinion在我看來, stay up熬夜，還使用了不少精典句式，如：Most of us feel nervous whenever we’re taking an important exam. 這句話用了讓步狀語從句， it’s important for us to have a fight attitude towards exams. 這句話用了it做形式主語， there is no need to worry too much about the results.這句話用了固定句型， We can also try a warm bath or a cup of warm milk before going to bed. 這句話用了省略句， (We’d better go out for a walk or do some outdoor exercises before and during an exam so that we can keep ourselves relaxed and then concentrate ourselves on exams.) 這句話用了結(jié)果狀語從句，還有文章還使用了First of all, Besides,這樣的關(guān)聯(lián)詞使文章更加連貫。