【題目】前段時(shí)間，由于傳染病，課，很多學(xué)生由于用眼過(guò)度，視力下降很快。假如你是揚(yáng)州中學(xué)的學(xué)生李華，請(qǐng)你用英文向全校同學(xué)發(fā)起以”愛(ài)護(hù)眼睛”為主題的倡議書，內(nèi)容包括:

1. 用眼存在的問(wèn)題；

2. 愛(ài)護(hù)眼睛意義；

3. 提出倡議。

注意:1.詞數(shù)80左右；

2.可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；

3.參考詞匯: 傳染病epidemic

__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________.

【答案】Dear fellow students,

Some time ago, many students took online classes due to the epidemic situation ,suffering from poor eyesight . Thus, I’m advocating “Protect Our Eyes”.

Eyes are the window to the soul. Having good eyesight means we can not only see things clearly but also appreciate beautiful scenes better. Anyway, only when we form a good habit of protecting eyes, such as doing regular eye-exercises and reading in right light, can we really enjoy our life.

See well, live well. So don’t hesitate to act at once!

【解析】

本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文。要求考生發(fā)起一封以“愛(ài)護(hù)眼睛”為主題的倡議書。

第一步：審題

體裁：應(yīng)用文

時(shí)態(tài)：一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)

結(jié)構(gòu)：總-分

總分法指把主題句作為總說(shuō)，把支持句作為分說(shuō)，并以這種方式安排所寫內(nèi)容。

要求：1.主題：愛(ài)護(hù)眼睛。2.內(nèi)容：用眼存在的問(wèn)題；愛(ài)護(hù)眼睛的意義；提出倡議。

第二步：列提綱（重點(diǎn)單詞和詞組）

eye，epidemic, suffer from, due to, eyesight, such as, hesitate, advocate, anyway, form a good habit of, protect, eye-exercises,soul,be concerned about...

第三步：連詞成句

1. Many students took online classes due to the epidemic situation, suffering from poor eyesight.

2. Eyes are the window to the soul.

3. Anyway, only when we form a good habit of protecting eyes.

4. Doing regular eye-exercises and reading in right light can help to protect our eyes.

5. See well, live well.

第四步：連句成篇（增加銜接詞及適當(dāng)句式）

1.表并列補(bǔ)充關(guān)系：not only…but also, anyway

2.表因果關(guān)系：thus，so

3.表建議句式：

You had better do sth…,

It would be wise of you to…

I’m advocating “Protect Our Eyes”.

第五步：潤(rùn)色修改

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