Question

假定你是李華，你的一位美國(guó)朋友Jane在北京學(xué)習(xí)中文兩年，即將回國(guó)。現(xiàn)在由你給她發(fā)E-mail，邀請(qǐng)她參加為她舉辦的歡送會(huì)，要點(diǎn)如下：

(1)祝賀她順利通過考試，她的學(xué)習(xí)進(jìn)步很大，為她驕傲；

(2)感謝她幫助你們學(xué)習(xí)英語；

(3)時(shí)間：星期六晚六點(diǎn)；

(4)地點(diǎn)：陽光俱樂部(The Sun Club)302房間；

注意：

(1)必須包括以上主要內(nèi)容，可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，使內(nèi)容連貫；

(2)詞數(shù)：100 詞左右。開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

(3)參考詞匯：歡送會(huì) farewell party

Dear Jane,

Congratulations on your passing all the exams.

Yours Sincerely,

Li Hua

Answer 1

Dear Jane,

Congratulations on your passing all the exams. I am delighted that you have really made great progress in your two years of studying in China. There is no doubt that all you have gained is the result of your hard work. We are proud of you and we all appreciate your help with our English. We’ll always remember the wonderful time we spent together.

It’s a pity that you have to go back soon! So a farewell party for you will be held in Room302 in the Sun Club this Saturday evening. I wonder if you could come by 6:00 p.m. By the way, you may take Bus No.332 in front of your hotel and it will take you directly to the club. I wish you success and fulfillment in the years ahead!

Yours Sincerely,

Li Hua

【解析】

試題分析：題目要求給朋友Jane寫一封郵件，邀請(qǐng)Jane參加為她舉辦的歡送會(huì)。寫作要點(diǎn)包括：祝賀Jane順利通過考試；感謝Jane幫助你們學(xué)英語；晚會(huì)的時(shí)間和地點(diǎn)等。詞數(shù)在100詞左右，注意開頭和結(jié)尾不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；不要出現(xiàn)標(biāo)點(diǎn)和拼寫錯(cuò)誤，盡量保持卷面整潔、字體美觀；注意行文的連貫性。

亮點(diǎn)說明：

范文涵蓋了所有的要點(diǎn)，進(jìn)行了適當(dāng)?shù)耐卣梗�并注意語句的連貫性；范文還使用了賓語從句、定語從句、固定句型等語法知識(shí)，具備較強(qiáng)的語言運(yùn)用能力。

語法方面：賓語從句①that you have really made great progress in your two years of studying in China，②if you could come by 6:00 p.m.；固定句型There is no doubt that all you have gained is...；定語從句we spent together；主語從句It’s a pity that you have to go back soon!等，顯示了較強(qiáng)的語法功底，也使作文句式變得多樣；

短語和搭配方面：范文使用了be proud of, help with, by the way, in front of, wish sb sth等短語和搭配，使作文的內(nèi)容變得充實(shí)。

考點(diǎn)：書信類作文