文中共有10處語言錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處。錯(cuò)誤涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改。增加：在缺詞處下加一個(gè)漏子符號(hào)（/\），并在其下面寫出該加的詞。刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（\）劃掉。修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意：1. 每處錯(cuò)誤僅限1詞；2. 只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計(jì)分。

Dear Sir/Madam，

I'm middle school student of sixteen. I have a weight problem. Some boys often made fun of me and are unfriendly with me. They call me “Meat ball”，it makes me feel unhappily。 I'm now worried about my weight. Although I am a bit fat, I feel quite well. I enjoy my meals. I love eating meat very much. ButI like sweet foods， too. Now I am getting fatter and fatter. In the past two months, I have put on 5 kilos. I've got worrying about this, but I don't know how to lose weight quickly. Who can tell me the right way of lose weight? If you give me some advice, I'll be grateful.

1.加a

2.made改為make

3.with改為to

4.it改為which

5.unhappily改為unhappy

6.But 改為and

7.foods改為food

8.got改為been

9.去掉that

10.lose改為losing

【解析】

試題分析：短文改錯(cuò)題

1. middle school student of sixteen，student為可數(shù)名詞，需加數(shù)量詞，故加a

2. boys often made fun of me，時(shí)間副詞為often，可知是經(jīng)常性的事情，應(yīng)當(dāng)用現(xiàn)在時(shí)表述，故made改為make

3. unfriendly with me.，對(duì)某人不友好應(yīng)用句式be unfriendly to sb，故with改為to

4. call me “Meat ball”，it makes me feel unhappily，兩個(gè)句子不得什么都不用就連接起來，因此應(yīng)該加上連接詞，把it改為which，使其成為非限制性定語從句，which指代前面整個(gè)句子，故it改為which

5. makes me feel unhappily，在此句中，feel為使役動(dòng)詞，后接形容詞，表示感到….故unhappily改為unhappy

6. 改為and；第八句I love eating meat very much. But I like sweet foods，我喜歡吃肉，我也喜歡吃甜食，兩個(gè)句子是并列關(guān)系，不是轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系，故But 改為and

7. like sweet foods，food是不可數(shù)名詞，不能加s，故foods改為food

8. got worrying about this，一直擔(dān)心某事，應(yīng)用be worrying about.. 再改為現(xiàn)在完成時(shí)，故got改為been

9. don't know how to lose weight quickly. how可以做賓語從句的連接詞表示如何的意思，不需再加一個(gè)連接詞，故去掉that

10. can tell me the right way of lose weight，介詞后應(yīng)用動(dòng)詞ing形式，誰能告訴我減肥的正確方法，故lose改為losing

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