Question

短文改錯(cuò)。

     假定英語(yǔ)課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請(qǐng)你修改你同桌寫(xiě)的以下作文,文中共
有l(wèi)0 處語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯(cuò)誤僅涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改。
增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)（∧) ，并在其下面寫(xiě)出該加的詞。
刪除：把多余的詞用斜線( ＼) 劃掉。
修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫(xiě)出修改后的詞。
注意：1.每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞；
2.只允許修改l0處，多者(從第11處起)不計(jì)分。

      The first time when I went on a plane was when I went to Hong Kong with my Dad.
When I saw the plane, I thought it was very big. But when there was a lot of passengers seating
on the plane, it wasn’t very big any more. It could carry lots of people and baggages. That was 
so amazed! When the plane flew up into sky, my ears started to hurt. It hurt me very much 
that I wanted to cry. I said to myself, “Don’t cry. I can’t cry.” But I couldn’t hold back from my
tears. “If you chewed a piece of gum, it will stop the harm,” dad said. When I heard that my dad 
said, I chewed a piece of gum.

Answer 1

     The first time when I went on a plane was when I went to Hong Kong with my Dad.
                          1.去掉
When I saw the plane, I thought it was very big. But when there was a lot of passengers seating
                                                                                                2. were                       3. seated
on the plane, it wasn’t very big any more. It could carry lots of people and baggages. That was 
                                                                                                                 4.baggage
so amazed! When the plane flew up into∧sky, my ears started to hurt. It hurt me very much
    5.amazing                                         6. the                                                       7. so
that I wanted to cry. I said to myself, “Don’t cry. I can’t cry.” But I couldn’t hold back from my 
                                                                                                                                          8.去掉

tears. “If you chewed a piece of gum, it will stop the harm,” dad said. When I heard that my dad
                      9. chew                                                                                             10. what
said, I chewed a piece of gum.