Question

1．假設(shè)你是李明，在上網(wǎng)時，看了網(wǎng)友整理的"2011年感動中國小人物"榜單，收集的人和事令你非常感動．其中"周口阿婆"的事 情讓你深有感觸．請根據(jù)下表提示用英語寫一篇短文，講講"周口阿婆"的故事和你的感想．

周口阿婆	*祖籍河南周口的阿婆和老伴在深圳生活，住無定所； *阿婆每晚在深圳大學(xué)附近賣畫，餓了就吃兩口干糧； *10元一幅的彩筆畫，一晚上也只能畫好兩幅； *處境艱難但阿婆自尊心強，不愿乞討，堅持賣畫為生，自食其力．
你的感想	…

注意：
1．對所給要點 逐一陳述，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，不要簡單翻譯；
2．詞數(shù)150左右．
When surfing the Internet，I came across                                      

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一：
When surfing the Internet，I came across a list of ordinary people who moved China in 2011．
高分句型二：
The old lady and her husband are homeless，wandering in Shenzhen．
句型一 I came across a list of ordinary people who moved China in 2011 該句中有一個由who引導(dǎo)的定語從句，who在從句中作主語，替代前面的先行詞ordinary people
句型二 The old lady and her husband are homeless，wandering in Shenzhen．在該句中wandering in Shenzhen使用了現(xiàn)在分詞短語在句中作伴隨狀語，表主動．

解答 When surfing the Internet，I came across a list of ordinary people who moved China in 2011．（高分句型一）I was especially touched by an old lady from Zhoukou，Henan Province．
   The old lady and her husband are homeless，wandering in Shenzhen．（高分句型二）Every evening，she sits near Shenzhen University and sells her paintings．When hungry，she just eats several pieces of dry food she carries with her．Usually she can only finish two paintings one night and for each she charges 10 yuan．Though life is tough，the old lady has her pride and refuses to beg money from others．（描述主人公）
   The old lady teaches me a good lesson．Obviously she knows the value of work．She prefers to go through all hardships rather than lose her sense of pride．Her story puts me to shame，for I always complain that my learning load is heavy and has a habit of depending on others．（個人感想）

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