Question

仔細(xì)觀察下面這幅漫畫，用英語寫一篇150詞左右的短文，描述圖畫并就“合作”這個(gè)話題，發(fā)表你的看法。開頭句已給，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

In the picture, two goats are tied to each other with a rope.

Answer 1

In the picture ,two goats are tied to each other with a rope. They both see some grass in opposite directions, and try to pull to get their own food. They are unsuccessful because the rope is too short to allow them to eat the food at the same time.
The picture is trying to tell us that cooperation is better than conflict. Both of the goats want their food at the same time, which has formed a conflict between them. However, if they decide to cooperate and eat the grass on the left first, and then the grass on the right, they will both be able to get their food. Thus things will turn into a “win-win” situation.
In conclusion, sometimes our goal is not that we get something and the other gets nothing, but that all people get what they want. If we are to succeed, cooperation plays an important role and will benefit both sides. Therefore, it’s essential that we should attach more importance to teamwork and cooperation in what we do.

試題分析：這是一篇看圖寫作，做題時(shí)：1. 認(rèn)真讀圖，可知圖畫主題是關(guān)于“合作”， 2. 初步構(gòu)思，考慮用詞、短語、句型和時(shí)態(tài)。3. 連詞成句，然后再連句成文。盡可能地充分利用所學(xué)的短語或句型來表述具體的內(nèi)容。象范文的：Both of the goats want their food at the same time, which has formed a conflict between them.用到了非限制性定語從句，4. 反復(fù)審核，修改錯(cuò)誤。5. 宜詳則詳，該略則略。對(duì)于一些細(xì)節(jié)方面的內(nèi)容，如果是文章必不可少的，在寫作過程中是不可將其忽略的。6. 注意所給的漢語提示。一般說來，看圖寫話中的漢語提示往往給定了有關(guān)的時(shí)間、地點(diǎn)、人物等相關(guān)的信息，還有參考詞匯都是有用信息。
點(diǎn)評(píng)：在把握了文章的中心后，應(yīng)在內(nèi)心構(gòu)思一個(gè)基本的框架，并考慮使用恰當(dāng)?shù)脑~語、短語和句型，以充分地表達(dá)文章的內(nèi)容。還有要注意使用適當(dāng)?shù)倪B接詞語或過渡性語句，更使上下文更為緊湊、自然。