Question

請結(jié)合材料，按要求用英文寫作。
A survey indicates each year China wastes 200 billion Yuan worth of food, which is enough to feed over 200 million people. So it’s high time we joined in the“Clean Your Plate” Campaign(光盤運(yùn)動(dòng)).
要求：(1)就此材料發(fā)表你的看法;
(2)緊扣材料，聯(lián)系身邊的實(shí)際，有自己明確的觀點(diǎn);
(3)詞數(shù)不少于60;
(4)在答題卷上作答。
                                                                               
                                                                               
                                                                               
                                                                               
                                                                               
                                                                               
                                                                               
                                                                               
                                                                               
                                                                               

Answer 1

We often see people waste food because they order too much for their meals, or the food is not delicious enough or not properly kept.
A survey indicates each year China wastes 200 billion Yuan worth of food, which is enough to feed over 200 million people.
Food waste means wasting money as well as wasting precious resources. When food is thrown away, it becomes rubbish which can be harmful to the environment and people’s health.
It’s meaningful to join in the “Clean Your Plate”Campaign, which helps us realize how difficult it is for a grain of rice to come on our plate an how important it is to save food. It’s wise to order a proper amount of food for our meals. If there’re leftovers, it’s better to take them home. To save food, we should start with ourselves and start from now.

試題分析：考查開放式作文，考生在寫作時(shí)要注意根據(jù)英文提示，切忌偏題，通過審題可知文章講的是光盤行動(dòng)的問題，要求緊扣材料，聯(lián)系身邊的實(shí)際，有自己明確的觀點(diǎn)，開放式作文難就難在沒有要點(diǎn)，給考生自由發(fā)揮的余地大，但也增加了難度，有的考生會(huì)覺得無話可說，這時(shí)可以充分利用所給的信息，展開陳述，但要符合英語習(xí)慣，句式選擇要富有變化。在寫作的過程中注意句型的多樣化和連接詞的使用。要求考生用地道的英語表達(dá)自己的觀點(diǎn)，要求觀點(diǎn)明確，駕馭語言的能力強(qiáng)，選擇詞匯的時(shí)候要選擇相對高級的詞匯，也要運(yùn)用多種句型，讓文章更有變化。難度在于選擇合適的詞匯和句型表達(dá)文章需要的意思，可以變換使用一些容易駕馭的句子或者詞匯實(shí)現(xiàn)同樣的目的。在寫作的時(shí)候要運(yùn)用合適的連接詞把要點(diǎn)串聯(lián)起來，使文章成為一個(gè)整體。
【亮點(diǎn)說明】A survey indicates each year China wastes 200 billion Yuan worth of food, which is enough to feed over 200 million people.這句話用的是非限制性定語從句， When food is thrown away, it becomes rubbish which can be harmful to the environment and people’s health.這句話也是定語從句， It’s meaningful to join in the “Clean Your Plate”Campaign, which helps us realize how difficult it is for a grain of rice to come on our plate an how important it is to save food.這句話有定語從句有賓語從句還有it形式主語， It’s wise to order a proper amount of food for our meals.這句話也是it做形式主語的用法。