Question

10．為了幫助中學(xué)生健康成長，某中學(xué)英文報(bào)開辟了"HEART-TO-HEART"專欄．假設(shè)你是該欄目的編輯Jamie，收到一封署名為Worried的求助信．信中該同學(xué)向你訴說了自己的困擾：近日容易發(fā)脾氣，使正常的學(xué)習(xí)和生活受到了影響．請用英文給該同學(xué)寫一封回信．
內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)如下：
1．表示理解并給予安慰；
2．提出建議并說明理由．
注意：
1．詞數(shù)120左右；
2．信中不能出現(xiàn)與本人相關(guān)的信息；
3．信的開頭與結(jié)尾已為你擬好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)．
參考詞匯：temper n．脾氣，情緒
Hi Worried，
I'm sorry to know that you're having such a bad time at the moment．                        
Yours，
Jamie．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇提綱類作文，根據(jù)題目要求可知需要用第一和第二人稱來敘述，時(shí)態(tài)用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)．文章分成三部分：一 表示理解并給予安慰；二 提出建議并說明理由；三提出希望．
高分句型：
1．The truth（主語） is that （引導(dǎo)表語從句）everyone will have one of those periods when （引導(dǎo)定語從句，修飾periods）things seem to be going wrong，so（連接并列句） you don't have to worry so much．
真相是每個(gè)人都有這么一段時(shí)間，在這段時(shí)間，很多事情好像都是錯(cuò)誤的，所以你不必如此焦慮．
Second，go outdoors and play games with your friends（祈使句，以動(dòng)詞原形開頭） as （引導(dǎo)原因狀語從句）physical exercise is an effective way to get rid of anger
第二，和你的朋友去戶外做游戲，因?yàn)轶w育鍛煉是擺脫怒火的有效方法．

解答 Hi Worried，
　　I'm sorry to know that you're having such a bad time at the moment．The truth is that everyone will have one of those periods when things seem to be going wrong，so you don't have to worry so much（高分句型一）．The important thing is to learn to control your temper so that you may not do or say anything you'll regret．（表示理解并給予安慰）Here are three useful tips：
　　First，talk to someone you trust about how you feel．This is a good way of letting your anger out without hurting others or yourself．Second，go outdoors and play games with your friends as physical exercise is an effective way to get rid of anger（高分句型二）．And third，remain optimistic about your future．Such a positive attitude towards life can be helpful in lifting your spirits（提出建議并說明理由）．
　　I hope you'll soon feel calmer and carry on as normal（提出希望）
                                                                                                                                                                                                         Yours，
                                                                                                                                                                                                          Jamie

點(diǎn)評 英語寫作是一項(xiàng)主觀性較強(qiáng)的測試題．它不僅考查學(xué)生的寫作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學(xué)生在寫作過程中綜合運(yùn)用語言的能力．在撰寫時(shí)要注意主謂語一致，時(shí)態(tài)呼應(yīng)，用詞貼切等．要提高英語寫作水平，需要兩方面的訓(xùn)練：一是語言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓(xùn)練，要有扎實(shí)的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識造出正確無誤的句子；二是寫作知識和能力 方面的訓(xùn)練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧．