Question

【題目】讀后續(xù)寫
閱讀下面短文，根據所給情節(jié)進行續(xù)寫，使之構成一個完整的故事。
One day, my brother and I were alone in our apartment. The reason was that my parents had both gone for a ball party and had left me in charge of everything. I was doing my homework while my younger brother was watching television. Suddenly, the doorbell rang. Ding-Dong! Ding-Dong! My younger brother had rushed to the door before I decided to answer the door. We both thought that our parents had come home. As a result, he unlocked the door and opened it.
Outside of the house stood a man who wore a black raincoat and black rubber boots. He looked no different from other people and he said that he was a salesman and asked politely if our mother or father was at home so he could talk with them.
Without any thinking, my brother said, “No.” He asked if we would like to buy some comic books, which he was selling. I quickly explained to him that we were not supposed to buy anything without our parents' permission. However, it seemed that he was not willing to follow my advice and he had an intention to enter our house.
Then I realized something terrible would happen. As I was about to close the door, he forced his way into our house. He took out a knife and forced me to tie up my brother's hands with some rope which he took out from his pocket. I tied up his hands but I tied in a special way so my brother could untie himself as we often did. The man then tied my hands up and locked both of us in the kitchen.
Soon he went upstairs to search the bedroom for something valuable. I managed to teach my brother to untie the rope on his hands. He then untied me. I rushed to the telephone to call the police, but the line was dead.
注意：
1). 所續(xù)寫短文的詞數應為150左右；
2). 應使用5個以上短文中標有下劃線的關鍵詞語；
3). 續(xù)寫部分分為兩段，每段的開頭語已為你寫好；
4). 續(xù)寫完成后，請用下劃線標出你所使用的關鍵詞語。
Paragraph 1:
The doors were all locked from the outside and what's worse, I did not have the keys.
Paragraph 2:
Just at the same time our parents came back home.

Answer 1

【答案】Paragraph 1:

The doors were all locked from the outside and what's worse, I did not have the keys. But luckily, the man forgot to lock the kitchen window. Both my brother and I managed to get out of the house through the window and we ran to the nearby police station and asked them for help. The police arrived at our house as soon as quickly. And as a result, the man was caught.

Paragraph 2:

Just at the same time our parents came back home. The police asked my family to go to the police station. It was there that the police told us the man was a wanted robber pretending to sell comic books and they have been trying to catch him for a long time. The police praised my brother and me for our bravery. After we went back home, I told my parents the whole story about the robbery. They were thankful that we were not hurt but they scolded me for not stopping my brother from opening the door to strangers. I learned a lesson on safety and responsibility. (154 words)

【解析】本文屬于浙江高考的新題型：續(xù)寫。對考生的思維能力和謀篇布局的要求非常高，首先考生要充分理解原文內容：父母外出，我和弟弟在家。賊人進入家里搶劫財物。閱讀時一定要注意文章中留下的線索詞，并展開合理想象。文章要適應第一人稱和一般過去時的時態(tài)。要點：1.我們從廚房逃走并報警；2.警察抓住賊人。3.父母親到家以后到警察局做筆錄，警察表揚我們勇敢機智。整篇范文結構合理，內容貼切，符合生活常識。在寫作的時候，考生運用了較多的高級句式和高級詞匯，體現出很強的駕馭語言的能力。