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3．學(xué)生學(xué)會(huì)做了一個(gè)關(guān)于中學(xué)生睡眠、飲食和休閑等生活習(xí)慣的調(diào)查，發(fā)現(xiàn)學(xué)生最常見(jiàn)的不良習(xí)慣有：晚上熬夜；不吃早餐上學(xué)，常吃方便面；長(zhǎng)時(shí)間上網(wǎng)聊QQ和玩游戲．請(qǐng)根據(jù)以上信息寫(xiě)一篇120個(gè)詞左右的短文，要求：
1．簡(jiǎn)述這些壞習(xí)慣可能產(chǎn)生的不良影響；
2．呼吁廣大中學(xué)生培養(yǎng)健康的睡眠、飲食和休閑習(xí)慣；
3．文章開(kāi)頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)．
Let's Develop a Healthy Lifestyle
According to a survey among middle school students，many students have the following bad habits：
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Answer 1

分析 本篇書(shū)面表達(dá)屬于提綱類(lèi)作文，根據(jù)提示信息學(xué)生學(xué)會(huì)做了一個(gè)關(guān)于中學(xué)生睡眠、飲食和休閑等生活習(xí)慣的調(diào)查，發(fā)現(xiàn)學(xué)生最常見(jiàn)的不良習(xí)慣有：晚上熬夜；不吃早餐上學(xué)，常吃方便面；長(zhǎng)時(shí)間上網(wǎng)聊QQ和玩游戲，寫(xiě)作時(shí)注意以下幾點(diǎn)：1、仔細(xì)閱讀有關(guān)提示，弄清試題提供的所有信息，明確幾個(gè)要點(diǎn)：簡(jiǎn)述這些壞習(xí)慣可能產(chǎn)生的不良影響；呼吁廣大中學(xué)生培養(yǎng)健康的睡眠、飲食和休閑習(xí)慣；2、提綱是文章的總體框架，要在提綱的范圍內(nèi)進(jìn)行分析、構(gòu)思和想象．要依據(jù)提示情景或詞語(yǔ)，按照一定邏輯關(guān)系來(lái)寫(xiě)．本文寫(xiě)作時(shí)可以按照要點(diǎn)所給的順序?qū)懀?、根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定句子的時(shí)態(tài)、語(yǔ)態(tài)；就本文而言應(yīng)該用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)．4．注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和句式，以增加文章的亮點(diǎn)．
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，層次分明，而且使用了多種表達(dá)：stay up late熬夜；As we know眾所周知；instead of 而不是，代替；Actually事實(shí)上；
      According to a survey among middle school students，many students have the following bad habits：staying up late into the night；going to school without breakfast and often eating instant noodles；spending much time chatting on QQ playing computer games．（高分句型一）
Going to school without breakfast or eating instant noodles instead of meals will cause a lack of nutrition．（高分句型二）
Actually，there are varieties of activities for us to relax ourselves，such as doing sports or listening to music．（高分句型三）

解答 According to a survey among middle school students，many students have the following bad habits：staying up late into the night；going to school without breakfast and often eating instant noodles；spending much time chatting on QQ playing computer games．（高分句型一）
       As we know，if you often stay up late at night，you will feel tired and sleepy during the daytime and cannot concentrate in classe．Going to school without breakfast or eating instant noodles instead of meals will cause a lack of nutrition．（高分句型二）Spending too much time on QQ or computer games will do harm to your eyes．
      In terms of study and health，we should develop a healthy lifestyle．First，go to bed a bit earlier instead of staying up late．Second，keep a balanced diet to build up our bodies．Third，don't spend too much time on the Internet．Actually，there are varieties of activities for us to relax ourselves，such as doing sports or listening to music．（高分句型三）

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