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3．假定你校將舉行ー個(gè)成人儀式，你將作為代表在儀式上發(fā)言．請你按以下內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)準(zhǔn)備ー篇 英文發(fā)言稿．
1．過去對成人的美好向往；
2．現(xiàn)在對成人的初步認(rèn)識．
注意：1．發(fā)言稿的開頭與結(jié)束語已為你寫好（不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）； 2．文中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的姓名、身份信息．
 
Good morning，everyone!
 
Thank you for listening．

Answer 1

分析 亮點(diǎn)句型一：As a child，I always hoped that I could grow up as soon as possible so that I could have whatever I wanted and do whatever I liked．本句是一個(gè)復(fù)合句，
that I could grow up as soon as possible是hope的賓語從句，so that引導(dǎo)的是一個(gè)結(jié)果狀語從句，在這個(gè)狀語從句中whatever I wanted 與whatever I liked是賓語從句．
 亮點(diǎn)句型二：Although I can enjoy more freedom，at the same time I realize that being a grownup not only means this，but also more responsibilities．盡管我能夠享受更多的自由，但是同時(shí)我意識到作為一個(gè)成年人不僅僅意味著自由而且是更多的責(zé)任．這是一個(gè)由although引導(dǎo)的讓步狀語從句，其中 that being a grownup not only means this，but also more responsibilities是一個(gè)賓語從句．

解答 Good morning，everyone!
      The topic of my speech today is"Thoughts on becoming a grown-up．"
      As a child，I always hoped that I could grow up as soon as possible so that I could have whatever I wanted and do whatever I liked（亮點(diǎn)句型一）．【對成人的美好向往】Now I'm a grownup，but I find things do not go as I expected．Although I can enjoy more freedom，at the same time I realize that being a grownup not only means this，but also more responsibilities（亮點(diǎn)句型二）．I hope to do more for my parents and society in the future to make my life more meaningful．【對成人的初步認(rèn)識】To reach the goal，I must first try my best to pass the college entrance examination and enter a good university．【個(gè)人觀點(diǎn)闡述】
Thank you for your listening．

點(diǎn)評 英語寫作是一項(xiàng)主觀性較強(qiáng)的測試題．它不僅考查學(xué)生的寫作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學(xué)生在寫作過程中綜合運(yùn)用語言的能力．在撰寫時(shí)要注意主謂語一致，時(shí)態(tài)呼應(yīng)，用詞貼切等．要提高英語寫作水平，需要兩方面的訓(xùn)練：一是語言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓(xùn)練，要有扎實(shí) 的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識造出正確無誤的句子；二是寫作知識和能力 方面的訓(xùn)練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧．