Question

5．假如你是學(xué)生會主席李華，為了推廣中國傳統(tǒng)文化，學(xué)生會將舉辦一年一度的英語演講比賽，本年度的主題為"My Favourite Traditional Chinese Festival"，請給你的英國朋友Carlie寫一封郵件，郵件的內(nèi)容包括：
1．說明你打算參加比賽及原因；
2．比賽的相關(guān)內(nèi)容（例如：時間、主題等）；
3．希望她給予你相關(guān)的指導(dǎo)．
注意：
1．詞數(shù)100左右；
2．可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；
3．開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)．
Dear Carlie，
How is everything going？I am much honored to inform you of the thrilling news that I am going to participate in the annaual English speech contest，the theme of which is"My Favourit Traditional Chinese Fsetical"．（高分句型一）
As scheduled，the contest is to be held on June 30th，2017．As we know，it is of great necessity to attach great importance to our culture．Therefore，not only will this activity provide us with the chance to improve our speaking skills，but it will also promote our passion for out traditional culture．（高分句型二）
But now I still have some difficulty in using proper English to express my thoughts．I would appreciate it if you could share your valued opinion concerning it．（高分句型三）
Looking forward to your reply．
Yours
Li hua．

Answer 1

分析 本篇書面表達(dá)屬于提綱類作文，根據(jù)提示信息為了推廣中國傳統(tǒng)文化，學(xué)生會將舉辦一年一度的英語演講比賽，本年度的主題為"My Favourite Traditional Chinese Festival"，請給你的英國朋友Carlie寫一封郵件．寫作時注意以下幾點：1、仔細(xì)閱讀有關(guān)提示，弄清試題提供的所有信息，明確幾個要點：說明你打算參加比賽及原因；比賽的相關(guān)內(nèi)容（例如：時間、主題等）；希望她給予你相關(guān)的指導(dǎo)． 2、提綱是文章的總體框架，要在提綱的范圍內(nèi)進(jìn)行分析、構(gòu)思和想象．要依據(jù)提示情景或詞語，按照一定邏輯關(guān)系來寫．本文寫作時可以按照要點所給的順序?qū)懀?、根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定句子的時態(tài)、語態(tài)．4．注意使用高級詞匯和句式，以增加文章的亮點．
【亮點說明】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，層次分明，而且使用了多種表達(dá)：inform sb of sth告知某人某事；As we know眾所周知；Therefore因此；not only，but（also）不僅，而且；Look forward to盼望；
I am much honored to inform you of the thrilling news that I am going to participate in the annaual English speech contest，the theme of which is"My Favourit Traditional Chinese Fsetical"．（高分句型一）
Therefore，not only will this activity provide us with the chance to improve our speaking skills，but it will also promote our passion for out traditional culture．（高分句型二）
I would appreciate it if you could share your valued opinion concerning it．（高分句型三）（

解答 Dear Carlie，
       How is everything going？I am much honored to inform you of the thrilling news that I am going to participate in the annaual English speech contest，the theme of which is"My Favourit Traditional Chinese Fsetical"．（高分句型一）
       As scheduled，the contest is to be held on June 30th，2017．As we know，it is of great necessity to attach great importance to our culture．Therefore，not only will this activity provide us with the chance to improve our speaking skills，but it will also promote our passion for out traditional culture．（高分句型二）
       But now I still have some difficulty in using proper English to express my thoughts．I would appreciate it if you could share your valued opinion concerning it．（高分句型三）
       Looking forward to your reply．
                                                                                                                                                                                                         Yours，
                                                                                                                                                                                                         Li Hua

點評 英語寫作是一項主觀性較強(qiáng)的測試題．它不僅考查學(xué)生的寫作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學(xué)生在寫作過程中綜合運(yùn)用語言的能力．在撰寫時要注意主謂語一致，時態(tài)呼應(yīng)，用詞貼切等．要提高英語寫作水平，需要兩方面的訓(xùn)練：一是語言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓(xùn)練，要有扎實的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識造出正確無誤的句子；二是寫作知識和能力 方面的訓(xùn)練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧．