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【題目】假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下短文。短文中共有10處錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。錯誤涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（∧），并在此符號下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（＼）劃掉。

修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意：1.每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

2.只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計分。

I am writing to tell you anything about the transportation in China.Over the past few decades we have developed an amazed network of public transportation.Besides,we have been decided to make efforts to make them much better.I am sure a network will satisfy your needs for traveling everywhere more convenient.People usually chose the means of transportation based with some aspects,such as the cost and the time needed.For example, businessmen are more likely travel by plane or high—speed train to save time while office worker tend to take buses or drive to work themselves.

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【解析】【1】 Over the past few decades we have developed an amazed network of public transportation.以ing結尾的形容詞一般用來形容物，意為：令人……的，故應把amazed改為amazing。

【2】we have been decided to make efforts to make them much better.we和decide的關系為主動關系，故應把been去掉。

【3】 ……make efforts to make them much better，結合上一句，這里表達應該是：努力使公共交通網絡變的更好。故應把them改成it。

【4】I am sure a network will satisfy your needs for……，

【5】……traveling everywhere more convenient，到處旅游更方便了，修飾動詞應該用副詞，故應把convenient改成conveniently。

【6】People usually chose the means of transportation……，這句話是在陳述一個事實，所以時態(tài)應該為一般現(xiàn)在時，故應把chose改成choose。

【7】……based with some aspects，短語詞組based on意為：基于……。

【8】……such as the cost and the time needing.比如需要的花銷和時間，cost，time和need之間為被動關系，故應把needing改成needed。

【9】businessmen are more likely travel by plane or high - speed train ……，固定搭配be likely to do sth 意為很有可能做某事，故應在likely后面加to。

【10】 ……while office worker tend to take buses or drive to work themselves.worker為可數(shù)名詞，故應把worker改成workers。