Question

假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請(qǐng)你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處。錯(cuò)誤涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)(∧)，并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線(＼)劃掉。

修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意：1. 每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

2.只允許修改 10處，多者(從第11處起)不計(jì)分。

One cold evening during the holiday season, a little boy about six or seven was standing out in the front of a store window. The little child has no shoes and his clothes were just rags. A young woman passes by saw the little boy and could read the desire in his pale blue eyes. She took the child by the hand and led him into the store. There she bought her some new shoes and a complete suit of warmly clothing. They walked back outside into the street, so the woman told the child to come home and have a happy holiday. The little boy looked her and asked how she was God. She smiled and replied that she was just one of His child.

Answer 1

1.去掉the

2.has--had

3.passes--passing

4.her---him

5.warm---warmly

6.so---and

7.come---go

8.looked 后面加at

9.how---if /whether

10.child---children

【解析】

1.小題1】在商店窗戶外面的前方站著，用 in front of,而in the front of表示內(nèi)部的前邊，去掉the。

2.小題2】通篇是過去時(shí)態(tài)，因此has—had。

3.小題3】現(xiàn)在分詞作定語，表示主動(dòng)關(guān)系，passes—passing。

4.小題4】文中講述一個(gè)小男孩，代詞性別用錯(cuò)，因此her---him。

5.小題5】副詞修飾動(dòng)詞，而形容詞修飾名詞，clothing是名詞，warm---warmly。

6.小題6】前后句是并列關(guān)系，so---and。

7.小題7】“回家”go home, come---go。

8.小題8】“看著某人”look at somebody，looked 后面加at。

9.小題9】問那個(gè)女士是否是上帝，怎樣how---if /whether是否。

10.小題10】one of+復(fù)數(shù)名詞，child---children。

考點(diǎn)：短文改錯(cuò)