Question

【題目】假定你是李華，你的新西蘭朋友Terry將去中國朋友家做客，發(fā)郵件向你詢問有關(guān)習(xí)俗。請你回復(fù)郵件。內(nèi)容包括：

1.到達(dá)時間；

2.合適的禮物；

3.餐桌禮儀。

注意：1. 詞數(shù)100左右；

2. 可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

3. 參考詞匯：table manners

Dear Terry,

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Yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Terry,

From your last letter, I learnt that you have no idea about how you should behave when you go to a Chinese family. Now, let me tell you about it.

When invited to a Chinese friend’s home, you should arrive a little earlier so that you can help the family prepare the dinner. At the same time, a proper gift should be brought with you to show respect for the host. Besides, you should pay attention to some table manners. The appropriate thing to do would be to eat the whatever-it-is and say how delicious it is. If you feel uncomfortable with this, you can just say a polite “thank you” and leave the food there. Never stick your chopsticks upright in the rice bowl, instead, lay them on your dish. Otherwise, it’s thought extremely impolite. The reason for this is that it seems to mean a sacrifice to the dead.

All in all, “When in China, do as the Chinese do ” is your best choice.

Best wishes!

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

本文是一篇提綱類書面表達(dá)，要求考生以李華的名義，回復(fù)一封電子郵件，你的新西蘭朋友Terry將去中國朋友家做客，發(fā)郵件向你詢問有關(guān)習(xí)俗。所以全文使用一般現(xiàn)在時并以第三人稱為主。

第1步：審題。根據(jù)提示可知，本篇為一封郵件；注意電子郵件的格式，以及書信中習(xí)慣表達(dá)的運用。

第2步：組織要點。1.到達(dá)時間；2.合適的禮物；3.餐桌禮儀。

第3步：根據(jù)提示及關(guān)鍵詞（組）進行遣詞造句，注意主謂一致和時態(tài)問題。

第4步：連句成文，注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞進行句子之間的銜接與過渡，書寫一定要規(guī)范清晰，保持整潔美觀的卷面是非常重要的。

本篇范文涵蓋了文字提示要求的所有要點，且有適當(dāng)?shù)膫�人發(fā)揮。文章結(jié)構(gòu)完美，分為三部分，很有條理性�？忌�運用了多樣式的句型結(jié)構(gòu)，讓整篇文章富有變化，并不死板。如省略句When invited to a Chinese friend’s home, you should arrive a little earlier so that you can help the family prepare the dinner. 表語從句The reason for this is that it seems to mean a sacrifice to the dead.等。