Question

假定你們學(xué)校的校長(zhǎng)發(fā)現(xiàn)越來(lái)越多的學(xué)生不分場(chǎng)合地使用MP3后，宣布了不準(zhǔn)帶MP3來(lái)學(xué)校的規(guī)定，并委托你制作了一張海報(bào)“why shouldn’t we take MP3 players to school?”
l Have a bad effect on study
l Expensive
l Damage our hearing
l Impolite to talk with others while we are listening to music
Do the very thing at the very time.
請(qǐng)結(jié)合海報(bào)內(nèi)容用英語(yǔ)來(lái)介紹一下此事件，向?qū)W校英文報(bào)投稿。
注意：詞數(shù)120左右。

Answer 1

Recently, our school has set a new rule, which doesn’t allow students to take MP3 players to school. I think it is necessary to forbid students to do so, as MP3 players have bad effects on students.
First, although the MP3 player can bring beautiful music, students should pay more attention to study. Sometimes we can’t control ourselves and listen to music in class. Second, the MP3 player is expensive, and puts unnecessary pressure on students from poor families. Besides, listening to MP3 players for a long time can damage our hearing. What’s more, it’s impolite to talk with others while we are listening to music.
In a word, we are students, and it is important for us to try our best study well at present. So we should do the very thing at the very time. Otherwise we’ll regret in the future.

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