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【題目】假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處。錯(cuò)誤涉及-一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏詞符號(hào)(/\)，并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線(\)劃掉。

修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下畫一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意：1.每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞;

2.只允許修改10處，多者(從第11處起)不計(jì)分。

As the saying goes, many little drop of water make an ocean. A small action may lead to major changes took place in society. My friends and I had participated in a voluntary activity at a nursing home last week. We first did some cleaning or washing. After that we spent half an hour chatted with the old people living there. Though it was a tired day, we were happy with that we did. I felt a sense of responsibility by visiting the old. If all of us lend a helping hand to the people in need, they can live in harmony with each other. A society is just as a family. If we are willing to help others, our small actions can make big difference.

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【解析】1.句意：很多小水滴。many修飾可數(shù)名詞復(fù)數(shù)，故把drop---drops。

2.此處是現(xiàn)在分詞做后置定語。故把took---taking。

3.根據(jù)last week可知句子用一般過去時(shí)態(tài)，故把had去掉。

4.句意：首先我們要進(jìn)行清洗。此處是并列的遞進(jìn)關(guān)系，故把or---and。

5.固定搭配：spend---(in) doing sth.在做某事上花費(fèi)---，故把chatted---chatting。

6.句意：盡管這是令人勞累的一天，但是我們對我們做的事情感到高興。根據(jù)句意可知把tired---tiring。

7. 句意：盡管這是令人勞累的一天，但是我們對我們做的事情感到高興。介詞with后面是賓語從句，缺少引導(dǎo)詞，從句中的did是及物動(dòng)詞，要有賓語，故把that---what。

8.句意：如果我們都能去幫助那些需要的人，我們就會(huì)和諧地生活。根據(jù)句意可知把they---we。

9.句意：一個(gè)社會(huì)就像一個(gè)家庭。故把as---like。

10.固定詞組：make a difference有影響，產(chǎn)生意義，故在big前加a。