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8．現(xiàn)在，許多中學(xué)生做作業(yè)時經(jīng)常上網(wǎng)搜索答案，《21世紀(jì)報》就此話題展開征文比賽，請你根據(jù)以下表格內(nèi)容寫一篇英語文章，向報社投稿．

1．Reasons	pressure； homework…
2．Advantages	save time； solve problems…
3．Disadvantages	lose the ability； …
4．Opinions and suggestions	…

注意：1．內(nèi)容應(yīng)包括表格中列出的要點；可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；
2．詞數(shù)100左右；
3．開頭已經(jīng)給出，不計入總詞數(shù)．
   Nowadays，many students often go on line to search for answers to their homework．
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Answer 1

分析 題目屬于表格類材料作文．題目要求根據(jù)表格所給信息寫一篇英語文章，作文應(yīng)涵蓋所有要點．第一部分?jǐn)⑹龀霈F(xiàn)這種情況的原因，第二部分寫有點和缺點；第三部分給出自己的觀點和建議．寫作時使用第一人稱，注意標(biāo)點、拼寫、時態(tài)、語態(tài)和語法知識的正確使用．注意作文的條理性，內(nèi)容要充實，描述現(xiàn)象要客觀．注意詞數(shù)限制．
亮點說明：范文注意使用Nowadays，Worse still，As a result，However，To start with，Besides，In my opinion，F(xiàn)or example，Meanwhile等來銜接上下文，很好地做到了語意連貫、銜接緊湊；范文使用To start with，Besides進(jìn)行列舉，比firstly，secondly更有新意；
范文使用了較多短語和固定搭配：search for，turn to the Internet for help，depend heavily on the Internet，realize the importance of finishing homework independently，try to，build up，communicate with等，使文章內(nèi)容充實；
范文使用了一些重要的語法知識：表語從句That is because students are under heavy pressure of study；固定句型too difficult to solve，find it convenient to surf the Internet for accurate answers，not only the ability to solve problems but also their interest in study；定語從句which saves them a lot of time；非謂語動詞asking them to reduce the amount of homework等，語法知識掌握很扎實；
measures should be taken to solve the problem這句是寫作常用的好句子，也可以用only when…+倒裝來作為結(jié)尾．

解答 Nowadays，many students often go on line to search for answers to their homework．That is because students are under heavy pressure of study and they have too much homework to do．（高分句型）Worse still，some of the problems are too difficult to solve．As a result，they turn to the Internet for help．
    There are advantages of searching for answers on the Internet．Most students find it convenient to surf the Internet for accurate answers，which saves them a lot of time and helps them solve difficult problems．（高分句型） However，this also brings some disadvantages．To start with，some students depend heavily on the Internet for answers．Besides，they may lose not only the ability to solve problems but also their interest in study．（高分句型）
    In my opinion，measures should be taken to solve the problem．For example，students should realize the importance of finishing homework independently and try to build up confidence in themselves．Meanwhile，they can communicate with their teachers，asking them to reduce the amount of homework．（高分句型）

點評 英語寫作是一項主觀性較強的測試題．它不僅考查學(xué)生的寫作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學(xué)生在寫作過程中綜合運用語言的能力．在撰寫時要注意主謂語一致，時態(tài)呼應(yīng)，用詞貼切等．要提高英語寫作水平，需要兩方面的訓(xùn)練：一是語言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓(xùn)練，要有扎實的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識造出正確無誤的句子；二是寫作知識和能力 方面的訓(xùn)練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧．