Question

假定你是李華．希望通過外籍教師Peter找一位英語筆友。請寫一封短信．描述一下你理想中筆友的條件，并說明為什么選這樣的筆友。具體條件包括：

1．年齡

2．性別

3 ．愛好（旅游、運動、寵物等）。

注意：

1. 詞數(shù) 100 左右；

2．可以適當(dāng)增加細節(jié)．以使行文連貫；

3．開頭語已為你寫好。

Dear Peter,

I am writing to ask whether you are able to do me a favor.

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                                                                      Best regards

                                                               Li Hua

Answer 1

Dear Peter,

I am writing to ask whether you are able to do me a favor.

I want to have a pen friend, hopefully a girl in her early twenties, and with interests similar to mine. In my mind, she is someone who is interested in traveling, swimming, and playing table tennis. Besides, it would be better for her to have a pet dog as I have kept one at home for some time. With such a pen friend, I hope I can share with her our experience in traveling, taking care of pets or whatever we have in common. And I believe I will improve my English by doing so and learn more about her country.

I look forward to hearing from you soon.

Best regards

                                          Li Hua

解析:

1.本文生活氣息很濃，但恰恰又很好地反映學(xué)生流行的交友方式和心理。

2.要求明確，簡潔但同時不失開放性，整體難度適中。

3.本文寫作注意以下幾個方面: 

A. 注意審題時一定看準(zhǔn)，“交友條件”包括“年齡、性別，愛好”三項，這是明確的寫作要點。

B. 題干中有一個比較隱蔽的另一要點：為什么選這樣的筆友？所以要清楚的闡述你的理由

C. 要想全文流暢連貫，必須有一個合適的結(jié)尾