Question

【題目】假定你是李華，你的美國(guó)筆友Johnson是個(gè)中國(guó)迷。他最近看了幾部中國(guó)電影，但感覺似懂非懂，因此寫信向你尋求一些建議。請(qǐng)你給他寫一封回信，要點(diǎn)如下：

1. 表示理解；

2. 分析原因(文化背景知識(shí)不足，臺(tái)詞翻譯不精準(zhǔn)等）；

3. 提出建議。

注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右；2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；3.開頭與結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

Dear Johnson，

I have received your letter of Nov. 5th.

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Yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Johnson,

I have received your letter of Nov. 5 th. You mentioned that you couldn’t make good sense of Chinese films. Don’t be upset about that, as it is not rare for foreigners to have such problems.

There are many reasons for it. A lack of cultural background knowledge may result in misunderstanding. What’s worse, the English translation of the lines may not be exact enough to convey their original meanings, which often confuses foreigners.

To have a better understanding of a Chinese film, before seeing it, you can make a careful study of its background through the Internet or related materials. Besides, turn to me whenever you feel puzzled. I am more than willing to give you detailed explanations.

I hope you will appreciate Chinese films better in the future.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】試題分析：本文為提綱類作文。首先，學(xué)生要仔細(xì)閱讀提示，弄清試題提供的所有信息，明確有哪些要點(diǎn)。其次，要注意提綱是文章的總體框架，要在提綱的范圍內(nèi)進(jìn)行分析、構(gòu)思和想象。要依據(jù)提示情景或詞語(yǔ)，按照一定邏輯關(guān)系來(lái)寫。最后，要根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定句子的時(shí)態(tài)、語(yǔ)態(tài)；語(yǔ)言表達(dá)要符合英語(yǔ)習(xí)慣。本文是一封信，按照內(nèi)容要求可以確定文章的框架結(jié)構(gòu)，三段式，第一部分表達(dá)你對(duì)他的疑問(wèn)表示理解，寒暄；第二部分是本文的主體，用給出的提示詳細(xì)寫明原因，不要逐字翻譯，要充實(shí)內(nèi)容，具體化；第三部分，也是很重要的部分，要給出你的有建設(shè)性的建議，最后要有祝福，要注意信件格式。

【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】本文內(nèi)容齊全，結(jié)構(gòu)嚴(yán)謹(jǐn)，層次分明，布局合理，語(yǔ)言精練，同時(shí)運(yùn)用高級(jí)句子。賓語(yǔ)從句的使用：You mentioned that you couldn’t make good sense of Chinese films.祈使句的使用：Don’t be upset about that,非限制性定語(yǔ)從句的使用：……, which often confuses foreigners.連接詞的使用也很不錯(cuò)：What’s worse, Besides。