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有人說， 父母為孩子包辦一切是孩子成長的最大殺手。的確，太多的中國家長習慣于為孩子包辦一切。假設(shè)你是李華，請針對這一現(xiàn)象給某英語報社編輯寫一封信并闡述你的觀點或建議。
1、簡述這種現(xiàn)象；
2、分析其弊端（從獨立性、興趣能力、影響等方面去分析）；
3、你的觀點或建議。
注意：1、詞 數(shù)100左右；
2、可以適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫；
3、開頭和結(jié)尾已為你寫好，不計入總詞數(shù)。
4、參考詞匯 獨立性independence;抵制resistance
Dear Editor,
I’d like to tell you some of my problems with my parents in daily life. My parents tend to make almost all decisions for me.
                                                                              
                                                                              
                                                                              
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua

Answer 1

Dear Editor,
I’d like to tell you some of my problems with my parents in daily life. My parents tend to make almost all decisions for me. They choose the school and subjects for me. Sometimes even clothing and daily timetables have to be decided by them.
In my opinion, deciding everything for children does not help them but harm them in many ways. Firstly, it will make children lack independence, which is unfavourable to their development in the long run. Secondly, in many cases parents’ decisions go against children’s personal ideas and interests, which will make children form resistance and naturally influence their growth.
I do believe to grow to be independent is a natural way for everybody. Parents should give us chances to make our own decisions. They may help us make choices instead of replacing us to make choices.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua

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