Question

9．人們對(duì)有些大城市在節(jié)假日里不允許燃放鞭炮持不同意見．請(qǐng)根據(jù)下表用英語(yǔ)寫一篇短文，介紹人們的不同觀點(diǎn)，并表達(dá)自己的看法．

贊成的理由	反對(duì)的理由	你的看法
1、慶祝節(jié)日的傳統(tǒng)方式 2、展示人們快樂心情 3、可以觀看美麗煙火	1、容易引起火災(zāi) 2、污染環(huán)境 3、損壞視、聽覺，甚至可能使人受傷或致殘，給家庭帶來痛苦	？

注意：
1．詞數(shù)不少于100；
2．可適當(dāng)加入細(xì)節(jié)，以使內(nèi)容充實(shí)、行文連貫；
3．開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)．
參考詞匯：煙火fireworks
Now it is not allowed to set of firecrackers in big cities on festivals．Now it is not allowed to set of firecrackers in big cities on festivals．Some people are against it．But I am for the idea．
Some people think setting off firecrackers is a traditional way to celebrate important festivals，especially the Spring Festival．It can show people's happiness and the festive mood．And people can enjoy the beautiful scenery of fireworks．
On the other hand，as we all know，setting off firecrackers may cause a lot of trouble，It may bring big fire and air pollution．And it will do harm to people's eyes and hearing．If firecrackers are not set off correctly they can injure or disable people，which will bring great sorrow to the family．
From these we can see there are more disadvantages，so I approve of not setting firecrackers，and we should seek other ways to show our happiness．．

Answer 1

分析 本作文考查正反觀點(diǎn)議論文．討論的話題是"節(jié)假日里不允許燃放鞭炮"，有正反兩方面的觀點(diǎn)．要點(diǎn)都給了出來．審題時(shí)注意本文使用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，人稱以第三人稱為主，發(fā)表個(gè)人意見時(shí)使用第一人稱．在組織成文時(shí)考生需要使用合適的連接詞把孤立的要點(diǎn)聯(lián)系成文．
重要短語(yǔ)：
be against/be for贊同/反對(duì)，On the other hand另一方面，set off 燃放，do harm to對(duì)…有傷害，approve of 同意，seek other ways to do sth尋找其他做某事的方法．
高分句型：
1．Some people think setting off firecrackers is a traditional way to celebrate important festivals，especially the Spring Festival．這句話用了賓語(yǔ)從句（引導(dǎo)詞that省略了）和動(dòng)名詞做主語(yǔ)．
2．a(chǎn)s we all know，setting off firecrackers may cause a lot of trouble．這句話用了as引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語(yǔ)從句和動(dòng)名詞短語(yǔ)作主語(yǔ)．
3．If firecrackers are not set off correctly they can injure or disable people，which will bring great sorrow to the family．這句話主句中含有一個(gè)if引導(dǎo)的條件狀語(yǔ)從句，后面使用了which引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語(yǔ)從句．

解答 Now it is not allowed to set of firecrackers in big cities on festivals．Some people are against it．But I am for the idea．（表達(dá)個(gè)人觀點(diǎn)）
Some people think setting off firecrackers is a traditional way to celebrate important festivals，especially the Spring Festival．（高分句型）It can show people's happiness and the festive mood．And people can enjoy the beautiful scenery of fireworks．（陳述反對(duì)理由）
 
On the other hand，as we all know，setting off firecrackers may cause a lot of trouble．（高分句型）It may bring big fire and air pollution．And it will do harm to people's eyes and hearing．If firecrackers are not set off correctly they can injure or disable people，which will bring great sorrow to the family．（高分句型）（陳述支持理由）
 
From these we can see there are more disadvantages，so I approve of not setting firecrackers，and we should seek other ways to show our happiness．（總結(jié)論點(diǎn)）

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