Question

“世界讀書日（每年的4月23日）”，假定你是李華，你的加拿大網(wǎng)友Peter成立一個(gè)網(wǎng)上“讀書俱樂部”，邀請(qǐng)世界各地中學(xué)生參加。假定你對(duì)讀書特感興趣，希望加入該俱樂部，請(qǐng)用英文寫一封自薦信，要點(diǎn)如下：
1．你對(duì)此事情的看法，并表達(dá)積極參加的愿望；
2．陳述自己的有利條件，如癡迷于讀書，中英文閱讀和寫作能力強(qiáng)等；
3．若成為會(huì)員，會(huì)給其他會(huì)員提供更多幫助并使自己讀更多的書。
注意：1．不要逐詞逐句地翻譯；
2．為使語(yǔ)句連貫，可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)；
3．詞數(shù)100左右。開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總數(shù)。
Dear Peter,
I’m Li Hua. I’d like to join your “Reading Club” on the Internet. ……
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Please consider my request, and I’m looking forward to your early reply.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua

Answer 1

Dear Peter,
I’m Li Hua. I’d like to join your “Reading Club” on the Internet. I think it will benefit all of the readers to share and enjoy more wonderful books. I really want to take an active part in the reading activity.
I am crazy about reading books, which I am sure, will appeal to the other members in your club. Besides, I can write some articles about what I have read both in English and Chinese, with which I can communicate well with other book-lovers.
If I can be part of your club, I will offer more help while making full use of the opportunity to read more.
Please consider my request, and I’m looking forward to your early reply.
Yours sincerely,

試題分析：這是一篇提綱類作文，話題是“世界讀書日“，要求用英文寫一封自薦信，要點(diǎn)大部分已經(jīng)給出，我們需要用正確的英語(yǔ)把給出的要點(diǎn)表達(dá)出來.本作文中給出的要點(diǎn)比較具體,故需要準(zhǔn)確表達(dá).寫作時(shí)注意準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時(shí)也要注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和高級(jí)句型使文章顯得更有檔次。特別注意在選擇句式時(shí)要賦予變化。如范文中的I am crazy about reading books, which I am sure, will appeal to the other members in your club.這句話中有非限制性定語(yǔ)從句。
點(diǎn)評(píng)：本文屬于提綱類作文，動(dòng)筆前，一定要認(rèn)真分析要點(diǎn)，理解要點(diǎn)要表達(dá)的含義，不能遺漏要點(diǎn)，跑題偏題。平時(shí)除了加強(qiáng)詞匯積累，寫作聯(lián)系以外，還可以適當(dāng)記憶一些類似的范文，這樣在考試中可以起到事半功倍的效果。