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Dear Peter,
I am sorry to hear you are very obsessed with the Internet that you have neglected all your studies.
As your friend, I'd like to share with you with my opinions on surfing the Internet.
With the Internet becoming part of our life, we are increasingly aware of the benefits it brings about.
It keeps us informing of current social affairs and the latest in formations. It enriches our life by allowing
us to play games or chat or listen music. As result, our life becomes colorful thanks to the Intermit.
Therefore, we should never be addicted to the Internet, especially when we were faced with the most
important exam in your life. I sincerely hope you can wake up as soon as possibly and strike a balance
between relaxation and your study. As long as you catch up, you will still live up to your parents'
expectations.
Yours,
Tom
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