假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請(qǐng)你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯(cuò)誤僅涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改。增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)(A) ，并在其下面寫出該加的詞。刪除：把多余的詞用斜線(\) 劃掉。修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下畫一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。注意：1. 每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

2. 只允許修改10處，多者(從第11處起) 不計(jì)分。

My name is Li Hua. I was born in Qingdao,Shandong Province on February 1995. I started the school in 2001 when I was six. I studied happy in Guangming Primary School from 2001 to 2007. After that I went to No. 39 iddle School of Qingdao and graduate last summer. The main subjects I study at school included Chinese,maths,English,physics,chemistry and computer. I like English and computer best and I am very good at it. Last year I winned first prize in the school computer competition. In my spare time I enjoy listening popular music and collec?ting stamp. My favourite sports is swimming in summer and skating in winter.

10.        (穿著一件粉紅色的連衣裙) ，the girl stands out and looks very attractive.

9. The cup fell down to the ground,        (摔成了碎片) .

8.        (當(dāng)你做體檢時(shí)) ，you should keep calm.

7.        (出生在一個(gè)貧困家庭里) ，Nadia had only two years of schooling.

6. She wanted to        (被單獨(dú)留下) for a while; she needed to consider her present situation carefully.

5.        (陷人沉思) ，she almost ran into the car in front of her.

4.       (把所有因素都考慮在內(nèi)的話) ，their findings are of great value.

3. That naughty boy spent a whole day at home,        (被鎖在了他的書房里) .

2.   (當(dāng)被問到關(guān)于這個(gè)項(xiàng)目的時(shí)候) ，Rose put forward several practical suggestions.