假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請(qǐng)你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處。錯(cuò)誤僅涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)(∧)，并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線(＼)劃掉。

修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意： 1.每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

2. 只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計(jì)分。

While taking a walk with my pet dog this morning, I found the middle-aged man nearby was shouting on his phone. Obvious, he had a bad day. Before he left, I noticed his keys were on the ground. So I immediately picked up and ran away to find the man. Several minutes later, I found him, whom was still shouting on his phone beside his car. I walked to him and asked if he could hold on a little seconds. At first, he was angry about my interrupt. Then I showed to his keys and explained the whole thing. On heard my words, he immediately hang up his phone and apologized for his rudeness.

假定你是李華，正在新西蘭學(xué)習(xí)。你計(jì)劃寒假期間在當(dāng)?shù)芈眯�，�?qǐng)寫一封e-mail向旅行社詢問相關(guān)的旅行信息。要點(diǎn)如下：

1. 旅行信息（如景點(diǎn)等）；

2. 當(dāng)?shù)靥厣�（如食品等）�?/p>

3. 注意事項(xiàng)。

注意：1. 詞數(shù)：100左右；

2. 開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總數(shù)；

3. 可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，使行文連貫。

Dear Sir or Madam,

I’m Li Hua, a Chinese student, studying in New Zealand. I’m writing to _______________________________________________________________________________

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Yours,

Li Hua

—The Silk Road has been a bridge between East and West for more than 2,000 years.

—Yes, ________ began during the Western Han Dynasty.

A. he B. they C. it

In our class, there' s a ________ that when it is somebody' s birthday, they bring in a cake for us all to share.

A. conversationB. traditionC. discussion

Thousands of foreigners ________ the World Internet Conference in Wu Town.

A. attended B. accepted C. attracted

The doctor advises us to exercise ________ on hazy (霧霾) days because it may influence our health.

A. more B. less C. better

At school, some students are active ________ some are shy, yet they can be friends with one another.

A. whileB. althoughC. since

—Mom, who won the first place in the TV show I' m a singer?

—It ________ be Han Hong, but I' m not sure. Last Friday I missed it.

A. mightB. mustC. should

—Can you lend me the book Passing by Your World?

—Sorry. I returned it to the library just now. Maybe it is still ________.

A. available B. possible C. saleable

—Every day in Junior 3 is just a tiny step.

—You' re quite right. ________ by doing well in each step, can we achieve the final goal.

A. Always B. Only C. Simply