16.假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文,請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文.作文中共有10處語言錯誤,每句中最多有兩處.每處錯誤僅涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改.
增加:在缺詞處加一個漏子符號(∧)并在其下面寫出該加的詞.
刪除:把多余的詞用斜線(\)劃掉.
修改:在錯的詞下劃一橫線,并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞.
注意:1.每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞;
2.只允許修改10處,多者(從第11處起)不計分.
A woman stood at the window of an expensive shop.She finally asks to see a dress in the window.The assistant did not like the way she was dressing.He simply told her it was sold.The woman left angry and decided to punish her.She returned the following morning wearing a fur coat,with a handbag in one hand and a long umbrella in other.She asked about the same dress.With great difficulty,the assistant climbed into the windows to get the dress.And the woman said she did not like it.She made the assistant to bring almost everything in the window before buy the dress.