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Last Friday,my class took part in a meaningful and challenging course-Outward bound.Upon arrival,we divided into several groups by the coach there.Short afterwards,we got involved in various activity.One of them were jumping across a broken bridge.I was afraid of at first,so with the encouragement of the coach,I finally made it.What impressed myself most was climbing over a wall to"escape".We helped one another and all of us manage to"survive".Before we left the center,we had a photo taking to record the unforgettable experience,that gave us a good change to build up courage and improve our sense or teamwork.