Dear Sally,

Now I’d like to tell you something about my part-time job this

summer vacation, of which I worked like a guide in a travel agency.

The work was interesting but tired. I think it was helpful to work this

holiday. It was the first time that I have earned money on my own.

I’ve come to understand how hard my parents work to support

for the family. I used to keep on ask them for money, but now I’ll never

waste money and learn to share worry with my parent. I've learnt how

to get along well with others. What's worse, I've gained some working

and social experience and I have learnt something can' t be learnt from

textbooks. All these will be good for my future. In the word, I had the

wonderful and valuable summer vacation.

                                                                                                        Yours,  

                                                                                                           Li Bing

假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處。錯(cuò)誤涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)（∧），并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞作斜線（\）劃掉。

修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意：1．每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

      2．只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計(jì)分。

Dear Sally,

Now I’d like to tell you something about my part-time job this

summer vacation, of which I worked like a guide in a travel agency．

The work was interesting but tired．I think it was helpful to work this

holiday．It was the first time that I have earned money on my own．

I’ve come to understand how hard my parents work to support

for the family．I used to keep on ask them for money, but now I’ll never

waste money and learn to share worry with my parent．I've learnt how

to get along well with others．What's worse, I've gained some working

and social experience and I have learnt something can' t be learnt from

textbooks．All these will be good for my future．In the word, I had the

wonderful and valuable summer vacation．

                                                              Yours,  

                                                                                                               Li Bing

此題要求改正所給短文中的錯(cuò)誤。對標(biāo)有題號(hào)的每一行作出判斷：如無錯(cuò)誤，在該

行右邊橫線上畫一個(gè)勾(√)；如有錯(cuò)誤(每行只有一個(gè)錯(cuò)誤)，則按下列情況改正：

此行多一個(gè)詞：把多余的詞用斜線（\）劃掉，在該行右邊橫線上寫出該詞，并也用斜線劃掉。

    此行缺一個(gè)詞：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)()，在該行右邊橫線上寫出該加的詞。

    此行錯(cuò)一個(gè)詞：在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線，在該行右邊橫線上寫出改正后的詞。

    注意：原行沒有錯(cuò)的不要改

Dear Sally,

Now I’d like to tell you something about my part-time job in this     ___________

summer vacation, in which I worked like a guide in a travel agency.        __________

The work was interesting but tired. I think it was helpful to work this       ___________

holiday. This was the first time that I have earned money on my own.       ___________

I’ve come to understand how hard my parents work to support for    _________

the family . I used to keep on ask them for money, but now I’ll never      __________

waste money and learn to share worry with my parent. I’ve learnt how ___________

to get along well with others. What’s worse, I’ve gained some working _________

and social experience and I have learnt something can’t be learnt from     ___________

textbooks. All this will be good for my future. In the word, I had a __________

wonderful and valuable summer vacation.

此題要求改正所給短文中的錯(cuò)誤。對標(biāo)有題號(hào)的每一行作出判斷：如無錯(cuò)誤，在該

行右邊橫線上畫一個(gè)勾(√)；如有錯(cuò)誤(每行只有一個(gè)錯(cuò)誤)，則按下列情況改正：

此行多一個(gè)詞：把多余的詞用斜線（\）劃掉，在該行右邊橫線上寫出該詞，并也用斜線劃掉。

    此行缺一個(gè)詞：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)()，在該行右邊橫線上寫出該加的詞。

    此行錯(cuò)一個(gè)詞：在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線，在該行右邊橫線上寫出改正后的詞。

    注意：原行沒有錯(cuò)的不要改

Dear Sally,

Now I’d like to tell you something about my part-time job in this                1.___________

summer vacation, in which I worked like a guide in a travel agency.         2.__________

The work was interesting but tired. I think it was helpful to work this       3.___________

holiday. This was the first time that I have earned money on my own.      4.___________

I’ve come to understand how hard my parents work to support for          5._________

the family . I used to keep on ask them for money, but now I’ll never       6.__________

waste money and learn to share worry with my parent. I’ve learnt how 7. ___________

to get along well with others. What’s worse, I’ve gained some working 8._________

and social experience and I have learnt something can’t be learnt from      9.___________

textbooks. All this will be good for my future. In the word, I had a            10.__________

wonderful and valuable summer vacation.

此題要求改正所給短文中的錯(cuò)誤.對標(biāo)題號(hào)的每一行做出判斷：如無錯(cuò)誤，在該行右邊的橫線上劃（√）；如有錯(cuò)誤（每行只有一個(gè)錯(cuò)誤），則按下列情況改正：

此行多一個(gè)詞：把多余的詞用斜線劃掉，在該行右邊橫線上寫出該詞，并也用斜線劃掉。

此行缺一個(gè)詞：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)（^），在該行右邊橫線上寫出該加的詞。

此行錯(cuò)一個(gè)詞：在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線，在該行右邊橫線上寫出改正后的詞。

注意：原行沒有錯(cuò)的不要改。

Dear Sally,

Now I’d like to tell you something about my part – time job this    1．       

summer vacation, in which I worked like a guide in a travel agency.     2．     

The work was interesting but tired, I think it was helpful to work this   3．     

holiday. This was the first time that I have earned money on my own. 4．     

I’ve come to understand how hard my parents work to support for      5．     

the family . I used to keep on ask them for money, but now I’ll never   6．     

waste money and learn to share worry with my parent. I’ve learnt how    7．     

to get along well with others. What’s worse, I’ve gained some working 8．     

and social experience and I have learnt something can’t be learnt from 9．     

textbooks. All this will be good for my future. In the word, I had a       10．     

wonderful and valuable summer vacation.

Yous,

Li Bing

假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的一篇作文。文中共有10處語言錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處。錯(cuò)誤涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

    增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)（∧），并在其下面寫出該加的詞；

    刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（＼）劃掉；

    修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出改正后的詞。

    注意：1、每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

    　　　2、只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計(jì)分。

Dear Sally，

Now I'd like to tell you something about my part-time job this summer vacation，

of which I worked like a guide in a travel agency．The work was interesting but

tired．I think it was helpful to work this holiday．It was the first time that I have

earned money on my own．I've come to understand how hard my parents work to

support for the family．I used to keep on ask them for money，but now I'll never

waste money and learn to share worry with my parent．I've learnt how to get along

well with others．What’s worse，I've gained some working and social experience

and I have learnt something can’t be learnt from textbooks．All these will be good

for my future．In the word，I had the wonderful and valuable summer vacation．

第二節(jié) 短文改錯(cuò)（共10小題，每題1.5分，滿分15分）
此題要求改正所給短文中的錯(cuò)誤。對標(biāo)題號(hào)的每一行作出判斷：如無錯(cuò)誤，在該行右邊橫線上畫一個(gè)勾(√)；如有錯(cuò)誤(每行只有一個(gè)錯(cuò)誤)，則按下列情況改正：
此行多一個(gè)詞：把多余的詞用斜線(\)劃掉，在該行右邊橫線上寫出該詞，并也用斜線(\)劃掉。
此行缺一個(gè)詞：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)(∧)，在該行右邊橫線上寫出該加的詞。
此行錯(cuò)一個(gè)詞：在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線，在該行右邊橫線上寫出改正后的詞。注意：原行沒有錯(cuò)的不要改。
Dear Sally,
Now I' d like to tell you something about my part-time job this   76.________
summer vacation, in which I worked like a guide in a travel agency.   77.________
The work was interesting but tired. I think it was helpful to work this 78.________
holiday. That was the first time that I have earned money on my own. 79.________
I've come to understand how hard my parents work to support for     80.________
the family. I used to keep on ask them for money, but now I' 11 never   81.________
waste money and learn to share worries with my parent. I've learnt how  82.________
to get along well with others. What' s worse, I' ve gained some working  83.________
and social experience and I have learnt something can't be learnt from  84.________
textbooks. All this will be good for my future. In the word, I had a    85.________
wonderful and valuable summer vacation.