Dear Mr. Johnson,
I’ve learned from a newspaper that some clerks are wanting in your company. I am eager to being one of them. So I am writing the letter. My name is zhang Hua. I was born in the Hebei Province and I am in good health. I’ve just graduated in the Computer Department of Wuhan University. I did very good in all subjects and I am especial good at computer studies and English. I can read science books in English and doing some writing in English as well.
Beside, I know a little French. And in my spare time, I enjoy playing basketball. As is said that your company is very famous and I’ll very glad if you let me work for it. My telephone number is 027-89276628．I am looking forward to hearing from you soon.

Dear Mr. Johnson,

I’ve learned from a newspaper that some clerks are wanting in your company. I am eager to being one of them. So I am writing the letter. My name is zhang Hua. I was born in the Hebei Province and I am in good health. I’ve just graduated in the Computer Department of Wuhan University. I did very good in all subjects and I am especial good at computer studies and English. I can read science books in English and doing some writing in English as well.

Beside, I know a little French. And in my spare time, I enjoy playing basketball. As is said that your company is very famous and I’ll very glad if you let me work for it. My telephone number is 027-89276628．I am looking forward to hearing from you soon.

Dear Mr. Johnson,

I’ve learned from a newspaper that some clerks are wanting in your company. I am eager to being one of them. So I am writing the letter. My name is zhang Hua. I

was born in the Hebei Province  and I am in good health. I’ve just graduated in the Computer Department of Wuhan University. I did very good in all subjects and I am special good at computer studies and English. I can read science books in English and doing some writing in English as well. Beside, I know a little French. And in my spare time ,I enjoy playing basketball. As is said that your company is very famous and I’ll very glad if you let me work for it. My telephone number is 027-89276628. I am looking forward to hearing from you soon.

文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。錯誤涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（??），并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（\）劃掉。

修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意：1. 每處錯誤及其修改僅限一詞；

      2. 只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計分。

Dear Mr. Johnson,

I’ve learned from a newspaper that some clerks are wanting in your company. I am eager to being one of them. So I am writing the letter. My name is zhang Hua. I was born in the Hebei Province and I am in good health. I’ve just graduated in the Computer Department of Wuhan University. I did very good in all subjects and I am especial good at computer studies and English. I can read science books in English and doing some writing in English as well.

Beside, I know a little French. And in my spare time, I enjoy playing basketball. As is said that your company is very famous and I’ll very glad if you let me work for it. My telephone number is 027-89276628．I am looking forward to hearing from you soon.

文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。錯誤涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

       增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（ˆ），并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

       刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（\）劃掉。

       修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

       注意：1．每處錯誤及其修改僅限一詞；

       2．只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計分。

Dear Mr. Johnson,

       I’ve learned from a newspaper that some clerks are wanting in your company．I am eager to being one of them．So I am writing the letter．My name is Zhang Hua．I was born in the Hebei Province and I am in good health．I’ve just graduated in the Computer Department of Wuhan University．I did very good in all subjects and I am especial good at computer studies and English．I can read science books in English and doing some writing in English as well．

       Beside, I know a little French．And in my spare time, I enjoy playing basketball．As is said that your company is very famous and I’ll very glad if you let me work for it．My telephone number is 027-89276628．I am looking forward to hearing from you soon．

       文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。錯誤涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

       增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（ˆ），并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

       刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（\）劃掉。

       修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

       注意：1．每處錯誤及其修改僅限一詞；

       2．只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計分。

Dear Mr．Johnson,

       I’ve learned from a newspaper that some clerks are wanting in your company．I am eager to being one of them．So I am writing the letter．My name is zhang Hua．I was born in the Hebei Province and I am in good health．I’ve just graduated in the Computer Department of Wuhan University．I did very good in all subjects and I am especial good at computer studies and English．I can read science books in English and doing some writing in English as well．

       Beside, I know a little French．And in my spare time, I enjoy playing basketball．As is said that your company is very famous and I’ll very glad if you let me work for it．My telephone number is 027-89276628．I am looking forward to hearing from you soon．

假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。錯誤涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號(∧)，并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線(\)劃掉。

修改：在錯的詞下畫一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意：

1．每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

2．只允許修改10處，多者(從第11處起)不計分。

Dear Mr. Johnson,

I’ve learned from a newspaper that some clerks are wanting in your company. I am eager to being one of them. So I am writing the letter. My name is zhang Hua. I was born in the Hebei Province  and I am in good health. I’ve just graduated in the Computer Department of Wuhan University. I did very good in all subjects and I am special good at computer studies and English. I can read science books in English and doing some writing in English as well. Beside, I know a little French. And in my spare time ,I enjoy playing basketball. As is said that your company is very famous and I’ll very glad if you let me work for it. My telephone number is 027-89276628．I am looking forward to hearing from you soon.

假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同學寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。錯誤涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

    增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（），并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

    刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（\）劃掉。

    修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

    注意：1、每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

           2、只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計分。

Dear Mr. Johnson,

I’ve learned from a newspaper that some clerks are wanting in your company. I am eager to being one of them. So I am writing the letter. My name is zhang Hua. I was born in the Hebei Province and I am in good health. I’ve just graduated in the Computer Department of Wuhan University. I did very good in all subjects and I am especial good at computer studies and English. I can read science books in English and doing some writing in English as well.

Beside, I know a little French. And in my spare time, I enjoy playing basketball. As is said that your company is very famous and I’ll very glad if you let me work for it. My telephone number is 027-89276628．I am looking forward to hearing from you soon.

假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。錯誤涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（∧），并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（\）劃掉。

修改：在錯的詞下畫一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意：

1．每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

2．只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計分。

Dear Mr. Johnson,

I’ve learned from a newspaper that some clerks are wanting in your company. I am eager to being one of them. So I am writing the letter. My name is zhang Hua. I was born in the Hebei Province  and I am in good health. I’ve just graduated in the Computer Department of Wuhan University. I did very good in all subjects and I am special good at computer studies and English. I can read science books in English and doing some writing in English as well. Beside, I know a little French. And in my spare time ,I enjoy playing basketball. As is said that your company is very famous and I’ll very glad if you let me work for it. My telephone number is 027-89276628．I am looking forward to hearing from you soon.