文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。錯誤涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號( ∧ ），并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線( \）劃掉。

修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意：1.每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

      2.只允許修改10處，多者(從11處起）不計分。

Great changes have been taken place in my village. Ten years ago, the small and low houses, which lie on the north of a lake, produced much waste. As the result, the lake was serious polluted. To the west was a sandy field, that was the source of dust. Better still, a brickyard on the southwest side of the lake used up a great deal good soil. Now the poor house have been replaced by green trees and the brickyard by tall buildings. The sandy field that the villagers used to ploughing has been covered with fruit trees. On the lake the villagers often spend his spare time boating and fishing.

文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。錯誤涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（），并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（\）劃掉。

修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意：1、每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

2、只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計分。

Growing up is not easy．Sometimes all that is need is someone to rely on．For many years, she

was Mum．My mother was a career woman and has her own problems to take care, but when I needed her, she was always there．Her strength came from anywhere I don't quite know, somewhere very deep．She was so strong that she would never break down, even while I went to her with all my little-boy problems and shout at her．Her strength made me strong and gave to me courage to try things others thought were impossible．A helping hand is always stronger enough to lift you up．

文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。錯誤涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（??），并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（\）劃掉。

修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意：1. 每處錯誤及其修改僅限一詞；

      2. 只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計分。

Dear Mr. Johnson,

I’ve learned from a newspaper that some clerks are wanting in your company. I am eager to being one of them. So I am writing the letter. My name is zhang Hua. I was born in the Hebei Province and I am in good health. I’ve just graduated in the Computer Department of Wuhan University. I did very good in all subjects and I am especial good at computer studies and English. I can read science books in English and doing some writing in English as well.

Beside, I know a little French. And in my spare time, I enjoy playing basketball. As is said that your company is very famous and I’ll very glad if you let me work for it. My telephone number is 027-89276628．I am looking forward to hearing from you soon.

文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。錯誤涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（??），并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（\）劃掉。

修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意：1. 每處錯誤及其修改僅限一詞；

      2. 只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計分。

Dear Mr. Black,

I’m very thank to you for inviting me to stay with you in the come summer vacation. I

have been dreamed of seeing you again so that I can get more help from you in my English

learning. And I’m afraid I cannot go to your place in this summer. I’ve promised my

grandmother, she lives in the country, to spend this summer with her. She misses me too much

that I find difficult to refuse her request. I’m busy with preparing for my examinations at

present. I planned to visit you in winter if it’s convenient to you.

Best wishes,

                                                          Yours truly,

                                                            Li Ying

文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。錯誤涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（??），并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（\）劃掉。

修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意：1. 每處錯誤及其修改僅限一詞；

      2. 只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計分。

At a party, it is quite normal of someone to have a short conversation with you and then go

on to talking with other people! Don't think they dislike you and that they are impolite. It was

the custom at many parties in Britain, particularly there people are standing up rather than

sitting down. Here are ways of finishing conversation at a party. "Excuse me. I think I'll go and

get another drinking. See you later." "Oh. Excuse me. I've just seen Mary Jennings over here.

I've got to discuss a meeting we are having in Thursday. Would you excuse me and for a

moment?"

文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。錯誤涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

    增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（∧），并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

    刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（\）劃掉。

    修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

    注意：1．每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

          2．只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計分。

I will share with you a true story happened a couple of days ago. One of my classmate bought a bag of snacks from a food store. A few roommates were then invited to enjoy snacks. Unluckily, all of them got poisoned and had stomachaches with our faces pale. They are quickly sent to a nearby hospital. Doctors examined them but gave them some medicine. They were out of danger soon before taking the medicine. This accident should make us to realize the seriousness of the food safety problem. I strong suggest that the whole society pays more attention to food safety.

文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多兩處。錯誤涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。
增加：在此處加一個漏字符號（∧），并在其下面寫出該加的詞。
刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（＼）劃掉。
修改：在錯的詞下劃一個橫線，并在其下面寫出修改后的詞。
注意：1．每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；
2．只允許修改10處，多者（從十一處起）不計分。
All of us know the old saying “Practice make perfect．” It tells us unless we want to realize our aim, we should practise, and one day we will make it．It’s easy to understand．Once I wanted to learn swimming．At first I found difficult to control my body．I just sank into the water．I feel very frightened．Then I watched others who were good at them and asked them the key to succeed．I went to the swimming pool every day, learned from them and practised．A day, when my friend pushed me into the swimming poo1, I sudden found that I could swim．How exciting I was! Now I can swim much more better than before．

文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多兩處。錯誤涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。
增加：在此處加一個漏字符號(∧)，并在其下面寫出修改的詞。
刪除：把多余的詞用斜線(＼)劃掉。
修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在其下面寫出修改后的詞。
注意：1. 每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；
2. 只允許修改10處，多者（從11處起）不計分。
I’m a Senior 2 student and it’s a long way far from my home to my school. I have a lot of funs going to school by bike with my friends every morning. But few days ago my mother talked to me. She ask me to rent a room near the school so that I could devote myself to study my lessons. I don’t like that. I really love riding to school. I think riding is a good form of exercises, which can help me focus on that is being taught in class. Unless I do some exercise, I won’t be healthy and happily. This means I won’t do good in my lessons. Please tell me how I can do to persuade my mum.

文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。錯誤涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。
增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（?），并在其下面寫出該加的詞。
刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（\）劃掉。
修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。
注意：1. 每處錯誤及其修改僅限一詞；
2. 只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計分。
Dear Mr. Black,
I’m very thank to you for inviting me to stay with you in the come summer vacation. I
have been dreamed of seeing you again so that I can get more help from you in my English
learning. And I’m afraid I cannot go to your place in this summer. I’ve promised my
grandmother, she lives in the country, to spend this summer with her. She misses me too much
that I find difficult to refuse her request. I’m busy with preparing for my examinations at
present. I planned to visit you in winter if it’s convenient to you.
Best wishes,
Yours truly,
Li Ying

文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。錯誤涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。
增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（?），并在其下面寫出該加的詞。
刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（\）劃掉。
修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。
注意：1. 每處錯誤及其修改僅限一詞；
2. 只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計分。
At a party, it is quite normal of someone to have a short conversation with you and then go
on to talking with other people! Don’t think they dislike you and that they are impolite. It was
the custom at many parties in Britain, particularly there people are standing up rather than
sitting down. Here are ways of finishing conversation at a party. "Excuse me. I think I’ll go and
get another drinking. See you later." "Oh. Excuse me. I’ve just seen Mary Jennings over here.
I’ve got to discuss a meeting we are having in Thursday. Would you excuse me and for a
moment?"