Dear Aunt,

but I don’t know how to change her mind. Would you help me ?

                                Yours, Li Lin

Dear Aunt,

I am unhappy now, and I don’t know how I should do.         1           

Mary and I got to know each other through English                2 _____ ___

chat-room.. Since then, we have had chatted online almost         3 ____ __ __

every night. We have many in common as we are both               4 ____ __ __

girls at the same age. We would like to tell each other many        5 _________

things which are kept secretly to others. I will feel                     6 ______  

uncomfortable unless I can’t find her online.                             7 _____   

Besides, she told me two days ago that she would go                 8 ____    _

abroad soon. She insisted that she would get good education      9 _______ _

.abroad than at home. I know it is wrong for her to think so,      10 ____    

but I don’t know how to change her mind. Would you help me ?

                                Yours, Li Lin

假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請(qǐng)你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處。錯(cuò)誤涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改。
增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)∧,并在其下面寫出該加的詞。
刪除：把多余的詞用斜線/ 劃掉。
修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。
注意：1 每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞；
2 只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不記分。
Dear Aunt,
I am unhappy now, and I don’t know how I should do. Mary and I got to know each other through English chat-room. Since then, we have had chatted online almost every night. We have many in common as we are both girls at the same age. We would like to tell each other many things which are kept secretly to others. I will feel uncomfortable unless I can’t find her online. Besides, she told me two days ago that she would go abroad soon. She insisted that she would get good education abroad than at home. I know it is wrong for her to think so, but I don’t know how to change his mind. Would you help me?
Yours,
Li Lin

假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請(qǐng)你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處。錯(cuò)誤涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)∧,并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線/ 劃掉。

修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意：1 每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

2 只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不記分。

Dear Aunt,

I am unhappy now, and I don’t know how I should do. Mary and I got to know each other through English chat-room. Since then, we have had chatted online almost every night. We have many in common as we are both girls at the same age. We would like to tell each other many things which are kept secretly to others. I will feel uncomfortable unless I can’t find her online. Besides, she told me two days ago that she would go abroad soon. She insisted that she would get good education abroad than at home. I know it is wrong for her to think so, but I don’t know how to change his mind. Would you help me?

Yours,

Li Lin