Question

【題目】書面表達(dá)

Jack is having a good time in Sanshui Forest Park．

假設(shè)你是Tom，請以“A place I visited(一個(gè)我去過的地方)”為主題，根據(jù)問題提示，給Jack寫一封不少于8句話的郵件，介紹一個(gè)你去過的地方以及在那里做了些什么。

Where did you go?

When did you go there?

Who did you go with?

What did you see/do there?

Did you have a good time?

To: jack@penpal.com

Subject: A place I visited

Dear Jack,

How are you? ……

Hope you have a good time!

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Yours,

Tom

Answer 1

【答案】范文：

To: Jack@penpal.com

Subject: A place I visited

Dear Jack,

How are you?

Last year I went to Qingdao by train I went there with my family. On the first day, I rode a bike for three people with my parents. We took many beautiful pictures. On the second day, we are ate some delicious food. On the third day, we climbed the Laoshan Mountain. On the fourth day, I went shopping with my mother. My mother bought File a new T shirt. On the fifth day, we bought some gifts and came back home. I had a good time. What about you?

Hope you have a good time!

Yours,

Tom

【解析】

本文是根據(jù)題目A place I visited進(jìn)行寫作，內(nèi)容簡單。短文用第一人稱，一般過去時(shí)；注意詞匯的選擇，句型的運(yùn)用。

從以下幾個(gè)方面進(jìn)行寫作：

（1）郵件格式To: jack@penpal.com Subject: A place I visited。

（2）先問候，然后介紹自己去年去青島的方式及跟誰去的。 went to Qingdao by train；with my family。

（3）介紹在那兒干的事情。took many beautiful pictures；cate some delicious food； climbed the Laoshan Mountain；went shopping；bought some gifts等。

（4）表達(dá)心情，had a good time。

（5）郵件落款，Yours；Tom。