Question

【題目】書面表達(dá)

根據(jù)提供的內(nèi)容， 按下面的要求寫一篇英文小故事。

內(nèi)容提示： Mr. Brown 乘火車旅行， 火車在一個(gè)小站停下， 這時(shí)， 他感到餓了， 但是天又下著雨， 他就給一個(gè)小男孩一美元， 讓小男孩給他們各自買一塊蛋糕， 結(jié)果 ，小男孩買下了最后一塊蛋糕， 自己吃掉了， 然后把剩下的50美分還給了Mr. Brown.

要求： 1. 能將故事敘述清楚， 意思連貫， 詞句通順， 標(biāo)點(diǎn)正確， 書寫規(guī)范。

2. 不少于60個(gè)單詞。 _______________________________________________________________________________________

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Answer 1

【答案】Mr. Brown is traveling by train. The train stops at a small station. He is very hungry. He wants to buy one cake to eat very much, but it is raining hard. He wants someone to help him. A little boy is coming over to him. Mr. Brown stops him and asks him to buy cakes for him. He gives the little boy one dollar and says," Go and buy two cakes with the money. One cake is for me; the other is for you. Can you help me? "
The little boy is very happy and runs over to buy cakes in rain. A few minutes later the boy comes back and says to Mr. Brown, "I am sorry. I have eaten the last cake. It is delicious. Thank you very much. Here is your money. "With the words, he gives fifty cents to Mr. Brown and runs away.

【解析】這篇小故事從開始到結(jié)束都是逗號(hào)， 但是我們寫的時(shí)候， 要句句分清來(lái)寫，如

1： Mr. Brown 乘火車旅行, 翻譯成英文：Mr. Brown is traveling by train.

2.從他很餓，這一句同學(xué)們可以展開想象，想象到： He wants to buy one cake to eat very much.

3. Mr. Brown 想要小男孩給他買蛋糕時(shí)，可以用對(duì)話來(lái)展示故事： He gives the little boy one dollar and says," Go and buy two cakes with the money. One cake is for me; the other is for you. Can you help me? " 同學(xué)們可以發(fā)揮自己的想象力， 前提， 要確保自己想的對(duì)故事的發(fā)展是合理的， 并且自己寫的故事是沒(méi)有語(yǔ)法單詞的錯(cuò)誤的。