Question

【題目】你的英國(guó)朋友Jim所在的學(xué)校要組織學(xué)生來(lái)中國(guó)旅行，有兩條路線可以選擇：“長(zhǎng)江之行”或者“泰山之行”。Jim來(lái)信希望你能給些建議。請(qǐng)你給他回信，內(nèi)容包括：

1. 你建議的路線及理由；

2. 你的祝愿。

參考詞匯:長(zhǎng)江Yangtze River 泰山Mount Tai

注意：信的開頭、結(jié)尾已經(jīng)給出，請(qǐng)寫一個(gè)段落補(bǔ)全缺失信息。

Dear Jim,

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Hope you’ll have a good trip in China.

Yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Jim，

I'm so glad to hear that you’re coming for a trip in China!

Based on my experience，the trip to Mount Tai will be better. First of all，the scenery of Mount Tai is extremely beautiful. It is a main attraction in Shandong Province and has attracted numerous tourists every year. While you are climbing the hill，you can enjoy the picturesque sights around you. The green grass is dotted with the blooming flowers. Meanwhile, cool summer breeze fills the air with lovely scents. Besides，Mount Tai is not only a sight to visit, but also boasts traditional Chinese literature. Many famous poets wrote poems to praise it and many of those poems have been carved on the rocks along the paths. So the process of climbing offers a quick look of Chinese culture. Although the journey to the top will be quite challenging，due to the winding and uneven paths，but it will all be worth it. Just imagine，after conquering the mountain and standing on top to glance below, how great the achievement must be! So why not try it?

Hope you'll have a good trip in China.

Yours

Li Hua

Dear Jim，

I'm happy to hear you'll visit China soon.

As for the travelling route，I strongly recommend you to choose the one along Yangtze River, although two places are both amazing，showing picturesque scenery as well as Chinese culture. Mountain Tai affords the visit of just one city, while the trip to Yangtze River covers nearly half of China. So the latter is bound to provide you with richer experience, since you can have access to China's different areas and experience various customs. Also，Yangtze River carries more historical significance than Mountain Tai, which allows you to have a clearer overall view of Chinese history there. What's more，Yangtze River contains both historical and modern factors. Along the river are the wealthiest areas of China，where you can see booming economy, developed industry and prosperous cities. These allow you to observe China from both ancient and modern perspectives respectively, which will surely enhance your comprehension of China. Based on the above reasons，I believe the route along Yangtze River suits you best.

Hope you'll have a good trip in China.

Yours，

Li Hua

【解析】

本書面表達(dá)是一篇提綱類寫作。要求以你的名義給英國(guó)朋友Jim寫一封回信。

寫作時(shí)首先審題，本題體裁為建議信，屬于常規(guī)復(fù)習(xí)內(nèi)容．選擇其中一條線路，圍繞中國(guó)傳統(tǒng)文化的主線去寫就基本能扣題，稍微需要注意題干要點(diǎn)之間的界限，確保要點(diǎn)齊全．其次要考慮高分詞語(yǔ)和句型的選用，從句、非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞、倒裝、強(qiáng)調(diào)句型等都是可考慮的高級(jí)句型；詞語(yǔ)和句型的選用要包含作者的感情色彩和增強(qiáng)表達(dá)的氣勢(shì)；再次，運(yùn)用關(guān)聯(lián)詞如besides、what's more、moreover、for one thing …for another等，使文字更加流暢．